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Recent content by [Imaginative]:[Clockwork]

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    [Pokémon] Mr. Dervish [One-Shot] PG-13

    I get what you're saying here and now that I look at it, you're right. The intro about studying was originally because I wanted this to start out with a more dull, high-school-ish intro before kind of letting the reader realize that this kid murdered his teacher to make a huge contrast. But...
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    [Pokémon] Mr. Dervish [One-Shot] PG-13

    I'm always worried about description with first-person so it's great to hear that it had just enough. :) I've never read it. ._.;;;; /loser Haha, but yes, this character is quite a douchebag. It was great fun to write. XD Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
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    [Pokémon] Mr. Dervish [One-Shot] PG-13

    Here's a little bite-sized one-shot I wrote recently. I feel like it's something different for me, since the narration is unlike anything I can remember writing. But I had fun with it, so hopefully you'll have fun reading it. :) I didn't know this, but Dervish is Earl's last name. So the Mr...
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    Oh, I see what you mean. If closing is really what drove everyone away, it seems like that...

    Oh, I see what you mean. If closing is really what drove everyone away, it seems like that could've been a huge blow to the section. I dunno, I still feel like at least a little buzz going around has to be better than everyone leaving. :/ Also, Jax (or I guess JX_Valentine, since I don't really...
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    [Pokémon] [SWC] If We Walk, It'll Last Longer

    Yeah, I really wanted to make it more of an "every trainer" deal, so I didn't add too many specific details. Haha that was the main reason I lost points so I guess I'll take this opportunity to explain myself. I was basically thinking that once the trainer started to get more famous and was...
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    Yeah, I guess that would be a problem. Still, any activity is good activity right? And it seems...

    Yeah, I guess that would be a problem. Still, any activity is good activity right? And it seems that everyone was in that thread, so a clique consisting of the entire writing community would actually be cool. Devastated could've been one of Broken's working titles. XD I always try to avoid one...
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    Right now I have zero cred points based on join date. >:( Good Lord, that's a monster of a...

    Right now I have zero cred points based on join date. >:( Good Lord, that's a monster of a thread. They need to restart that. It's kind of funny/sad to see basically the same problems with the forum being discussed then and now. It's also odd that the kind of slow fanfic forum here gave birth to...
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    I think as long as you're semi-active and don't suck at whatever you do people start lumping you...

    I think as long as you're semi-active and don't suck at whatever you do people start lumping you in the "veteran" category soon enough. Was that a thread here? That sounds like an interesting hang-out spot, especially if it was as active as you make it sound. What a giant tease. I guess your...
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    [Pokémon] [SWC] If We Walk, It'll Last Longer

    I wasn't sure if I was going to post this, but I figured I might as well. It won 8th place, so that's not too bad, right? I've edited it a little based on the judges' critique. It's an easy read, just under 2 pages, I think, since I wrote it in two hours go for quality, not quantity. Anyway...
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    The secrecy-wink combo just makes it all the more painful to know I'm not allowed to see. If...

    The secrecy-wink combo just makes it all the more painful to know I'm not allowed to see. If only I wasn't so cheap... The problem is that those authors (how long have you been on the forums? Those are all like the ancient legendary members XD ) usually don't give a lot of reasons to tear their...
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    Small Writing Competition!

    8th place! Whoo! That's perfectly fine with me. ;D Thanks to the judges for taking the time to score and comment. I can see why you didn't think it fit particularly well with the prompt since, reading it over, I can see that I kind of strayed from the original, prompt-y idea I had. Oh well...
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    I'm sure they're all secretly members of a genius cult speaking to each other in code but until...

    I'm sure they're all secretly members of a genius cult speaking to each other in code but until I begin an investigation I just like to be annoyed. It's a blast. *falls on knees* I need to be a part of this VIP forum. I honestly can't imagine what you could talk about that it would need a...
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    What I don't understand is why people create an already unique username and then add...

    What I don't understand is why people create an already unique username and then add 457834589345 to the end. It makes me dislike them instantly. >:( Just tell them it's your brother or something. Who also writes fanfiction. In the exact same style as you. Ooh, VIP forums. Sounds exciting. ;D...
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    Both of those reasons stand the test of time so well. It's almost a shame you changed it now...

    Both of those reasons stand the test of time so well. It's almost a shame you changed it now that I think about it. XD People must be donating all the time 'cause I see those blue italicized names all over the place. I have to wonder what the many levels of authority are for though. Another...
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    I think in the distant past Serebii allowed name changes. I don't understand why they took it...

    I think in the distant past Serebii allowed name changes. I don't understand why they took it away though. :/ Dragon user X isn't a bad name but it does kind of lack finesse I guess. I have to ask: what's the reason behind some names being blue (or purple... it's hard to tell with my color...
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