Recent content by Infiltrat0rN7

Hello, this is my first review, so I apologize in advance for my ineptitude. I find it odd that Ash kept his pikachu inside of a pokeball, for pikachu as far as I can remember avoids being trapped in a pokeball. I suppose that some sort of radiation could be present in the atmosphere, and...

BEING REWRITTEN Chapter 2: Red in the Dark I made a point to land softly on the grass alongside the road so that my feet would be cushioned, as I was walking in my socks. It also served to reduce any sound that I made which was a plus as I had no interest in a conflict with a pokémon given...

Dusk "Tragedy is critical to isolation, for only when you are alone do you understand who you truly are. Yet when adversity never relents, it seems as if you are losing who you are. And it seems that I am losing myself. Inch by inch, into the darkness that follows me." PG-13 Table of Contents...

Here it is! The sign up! Finally! I was supposed to post in the summer but never got around doing until now after a few friendly reminders... Name: Donovan Hawk Age: 24 Sex: Male Battle type: Rogue Appearance: Donovan is 1.83 metres tall and weighs 50 kilograms. His facial features are...

Hello! It's me again. I have one large question this time. I do believe the only thing coming after this thread will be the actual story! While planning my story I realised that pokemon wouldn't trust you just because you caught them. In fact, every self aware living organism would behave in a...

Thanks everyone! You're feedback is as usual appreciated. As it is right now, I think swearing would seem in place for my story and not forced, as I am trying for a more realistic world. Also kids these days do have potty mouths Anyway, thanks again!

Hello, it's me again. I have a few questions to ask about swearing: Can swearing seem forced? Does swearing actually help set a more serious tone? Is swearing frowned upon? Does swearing turn you off? Dropping the F-bomb= M rating? Is there anything else I should know about swearing? Any...

Hello Khawill, I'm going to answer your questions, but if you disagree with me or need more info go ahead and ask. As long as you're updating frequently it's fine. Since I'm weird I like to have one or two extra chapters before I publish anything and try to update once a week, so even in the...

Hello. I'm going to try to explain things as I think of them, if you have any questions or comments though, feel free to ask for a better explanation. It is reasonable to have a pokemon centre to have facilities to treat humans. I mean, if you're travelling in the wild, there is a high chance...

Thanks for the reply. Both of them in essence, can be a future prologue, both happen in the future. The monologue though, is generally written after the events of the story, where as the future prologue is a snippet from the climax of the story. Geez, now I have someone to impress. Anyway...

No need to answer anymore! I decided on trying a "monologue prologue". If you care about the details feel free to ask me. If you still want to give an opinion go ahead.

Greetings. I am in need of assistance once more, the fic still being my "trainer fic", except there is an issue of prologues. If I write a fic involving a pokemon journey, a distinction should be made early on to indicate that this story is different. To achieve this distinction, I must utilise...

Sorry for the late reply. I want to thank you all for your kind words and feedback, it really helped my story progress.

Title of story: Derivatives Fandom: Pokémon Plot summary: "To go on a Pokémon adventure." The dream of every child, and at one point even mine. I trekked this path though, and I assure you nothing but horrors ensue. A psychotic father hellbent on leaving a legacy for the ages, a man forming a...

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Would that still apply it the character starts off with that belief but, his hopes are crushed by the reality of him not being some pokemon prodigy? (If by trainer fic you were referring to a bad trainer fic.) As for the rest, as long as my trainer and...