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Ooh, I totally forgot to comment, and I totally read this a week ago. Anyways, great chapter. Post. More. NOW. :)

Yay, a review! CHAPTER TEN: The Rocket Gang! Save the Pokemon! Dr. Okido and his granddaughter bent over the computer displaying the data that the three Zukan trainers had collected. Dr. Okido had considered using his spare Fushigidane to gather data on Pokemon in the immediate area, but in...

Ergh, I shoulda commented sooner. It's a good chapter, if a little shortish. Still, pretty nice, and I hope Vs. Bibarel is up soon.

He can't die until Dawn legally changes her name to Garnet! Or whatever... :P

This was Lucario Pt One? This makes me curious as to how Lucario II is gonna come about, seeing as he's already won... *roots for a Pearl-ish victory*

Butterfree- Not likely. In the Japanese version, IIRC, the implication is that mating is the end of the life cycle, and that the matees die soon after. Pidgeot- Protecting Kanto, and it will probably stay there until Ash comes back.

Fixed stupidity. Natsume originally called the destinies "inescapable and fatal" and then later on "changeable." The chapter has now been fixed. Natsume now sees that the majority of the destiny is inescapable, and there is a doom present, but she can't tell if the doom is inescapable as well.

Not to mention the fact that Japan didn't have it. Although, in Gen I and II, there were legit ways of getting Mew and Celebi in Japan, which just goes to show how ridiculous this all is. I'm just gonna buy a cheat thingy once I start playing DP for real (prolly when Garnet/whatever comes out)...

CHAPTER NINE: The Tokiwa Forest! The Feral Pokemon! A dense fog, more solid than iron itself, had settled over Yamabuki City, the center of Kanto, the crossroads between the other main cities. Many had noticed the fog, many were concerned. But none could penetrate it. What few people did know...

Except, they would have a really bad time with that, seeing as a Lvl 70 Dialga wouldn't listen to a trainer just leaving New Bark anyways. Allowing trade with D/P from Ecruteak on sounds pretty reasonable, and even then, they'll still have to send in Pokemon UNDER level 40 (I think...). Ok, so...

It's also just vague enough to perhaps refer to the Y/C/E of the DP generation, although this is unlikely. *Hopes against hope anyways*

My favorite Pokemon to write- I don't think I have one. I like to try to make each Pokemon unique, compared to the way it's normally portrayed, such as (perhaps) a GOOD Koffing, or a beautiful Arbok, or something like that. Not so much yet in my current fanfic, but the next chapter is pretty...

And yet your screen name is Dunsparce, as opposed to Nokocchi. :P PS, what did you think of the story?

false swipe jay, In-game data meaning references to Johto in a Pokemon's summary. The whole "Met at" section. The rest is just REALLY blatant hinting.

CHAPTER EIGHT: The Trek North! A Thieving Pokemon! The water rose, the water fell. Though few had seen it who had not participated in it, an exodus of mass proportions had taken place. And Nature, powerful though it was to resist changes and disturbances, found itself shaken. What had seemed a...