Recent content by Marek

First off, bravo. I found it very well written(though I can't say for typing errors since english isn't my primary language). Since this is all I can say about this let's move on to the story itself. For being a prologue I find it to be just about right in size and just enough to keep...

First off, Congratulations!! It's just a perfect story. Ok there may be some typing mistakes, but so what. The idea of the story is pure genious. And the style of writing is just wow. From the moment I read the first chapter I was sitting on the edge of my seet and found it very hard to stop...

A very good story, nicely written. I see that class wasn't a complete waste

Chapter 3 After a week of walking and training his pokemon, Marek had reached his goal. Pergan City. A huge city, which held a pokemon gym. One of the very first gyms in Kanto. It was a very busy city, but due to the heat wave that had been crossing over whole Kanto, not many people were...

Chapter II The next morning when he woke up his Gowlithe was still sound asleep. The sun was already up quite high and Marek looked at his watch. “Oh damn, it is already past 10 am” he gasped. He started packing his stuff and because of all the noice Growlithe awoke. “Sorry about the...

I would like comments on the storycontent and on my righting style. Please be honest but don't be rude, it is afterall my first fanfic and it isn't in my native language. ------ Chapter one: A new beginning: It was still dark in Oldron town. The sun would be coming up any minute now and...