Recent content by Sarafina

You need to publish some! This is one of the best fics ever! =] Very interested. I knida missed out on a lot, but I caught up! I saw no problems! Keep on writing!

This part should be more exciting, if anyone bothers to read it, but, it took me a while so, enjoy! Continued ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ The next morning I awoke to the gentle swaying of the water. I was drifting into the waves! I watched the waves reach high lands because of the wind force last...

I'm going to add onto this chapter, I just figured I needed a little more planning before I finish it. This chapter will be continued... ^_^ Chapter Two _____________________ Moonlight filtered the path to sea as I silently crept out of the den and into the black darkness. I thought of...

Yeah, I read it too! ^_^ It was really good too! I didn't make many comments but I thought it was great! I need to reply more often. :D

Thanks! I know that my length is never enough, I can never get it just right! Anyways, the intro won't be included in the first chapter. ~Chapter One~ __________________________________ Moonlight filtered the path that led my home. Wind whispered my name, just like my mother calling me...

That was great! I'm really beggining to like this fic, I haven't replied since, forever. I was reading it though. Great job anyways! ^_^

This is my third fic I think, well, I don't remember, but, I haven't finished the first chapter yet, so, ummm, here's the introduction! True Golden Heart By: Caroline Introduction My entire body thrashed beneath the water?s surface. I swam up and burst above the surface. I gasped for...

Yes, short, I know... It was bad of me... I was gonna continue but I became lazy cuz I'm stupid. Chapter Seven: I Meet Him ______________________________________ Squirt: My arms and legs emerged from my shell quickly. I got out of my warm sleeping bag into the cool night. I...

It looks pretty good in length, but I think that reading would be a lot easier if you put an entire blank line in between whenever someone starts talking, but I thought that it wasn't bad, but, also, I would like if you made the chapters notice able, the names of them, you know, but its not...

Because of how stupid I am, I cannot answer that question but I can assure you that I will try not to mkae it as confusing! Oh yes, and when it says, Squirt:, that means the story is going through Squirt's eyes. Oh, and one more thing, please don't accuse me of having this short and not having...

That was perfect..........Grass is qualified a great fic........ ^_^

Do have an idea yet? I've been waiting forever! *sits down* Waiting! Wait a sec! Have you stopped writing in this or something?!

Sorry I didn't finish this chapter! I was grounded forever and this is all I've gotten done in the last two days! I'll continue the chapter soon! Chapter Six: I Meet Him ______________________________________ I turned to see Squirt who was still playing around with the girl who had...

This is very descriptive but you may want to make an extra blank line evrytime some begins talking. It makes it look much neater and it makes it easier to read but keep up the good work!

Thanks to everyone who bothered to read my story and thanks for the review! And I know on this chapter deatail is lacking but I couldn't help it. At the end I tried to make it better! Anyways, on with the chapter! ^_^ My New Life __________________________________ After about a half...