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Recent content by shimizu_mai

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    [Completed] Pokemon Raptor Version

    Probably, it's supposed to be, "Why don't you say she only cares about the plate?" I'm not sure if someone answered that already. -skimmed through thread- ...Steven. Please don't be evil. ;___; Can't wait for the demo~. Keep up the good work.
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    [Completed] Pokemon Raptor Version

    The game looks really nice still~! The grammar and spelling have greatly improved (from the proofreader?), but there are still some small errors/typos, especially in punctuation and... verbal usage. Yeah. The thing that bugs me the most is in the last screenie in the the batch before the last...
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    Pokemon Chronicles

    Kind of like those TV interviews/flashbacks? I think it's a good idea, especially the "Lugia Spotted by Boat". It would be useful to know which legendaries you could catch and where to find them. I know that it's just a rough draft, but the formatting needs work; I'm also not sure how the...
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    Pokemon Chronicles

    XD;; When I saw the palm tree tiles, I thought you were going to have coconut picking. Gah. -dork- Keep up the good work.
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    [Completed] Pokemon Raptor Version

    Deoxys, fwee. This'll be my first time... err, legally battling/catching one. Good job on the new screens! I can't wait for the demo~
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    Pokemon Chronicles

    I like the concept of a secret store. -loves on- (Aaand, don't you think giving us twelve starters will spoil us? ;D) Assuming that you'll put all/more regions in the game, will all E4 and Pokemon be available as well~? Good luck on making this, I'll definitely be watching it~.
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    [Completed] Pokemon Raptor Version

    Beautiful CGs~ >/////< The neon green screen is a tad bright. Other than that, everything looks great. I don't mind the lack of music. Personally, I don't listen to GBA music a lot. Five more days to go for the beta, right? ;D -excited-
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    Pokemon tsunami - my first game

    For most of the graphics, see above, Flameguru's number 4. (In the fourth screenshot, consider taking Dawn's sprite out. Apparently, D/P characters aren't going to be in this game, so her sprite isn't needed. Even if the sprite's for a new character, I strongly recommend making/using a different...
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    Pokemon Dating Sim(I need help)

    Uhh. Steven, Lance, Gary, and Wallace? These people seem to gather a lot of fangirls. -personally doesn't care much for Lance or Wallace- x_x; I suggest that you keep the amount of characters to a minimum. Maybe... eight at the /very/ most? I mean, it'll already be confusing enough for the...
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    [Completed] Pokemon Raptor Version

    Sweet. -subscribes to thread- The graphics are very good; not to mention that the storyline is interesting as well. :') However, you might want to look over the grammar and spelling in some places. -I'm a grammar freak. Roaaar.- Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the beta. Eight more days...
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