Recent content by Yami Rui

That really had nothing to do with the topic Rogers. Now posting based on the topic, yeah Sukatanku seems like a nice choice for Jessie. Just seemed to come up into my mind.

You can find Poliwag on Route 31 in Johto. And besides, not everybody agrees with the Hoenn Pokemon in that fic. Here's a part of a review to that fic. That was about the Poochyena in Johto by the way.

Do you remember the fanfic? LOL, yeah well you could. But if you did that, without any common sense, it takes potential reviewers away from your fanfic. Do you see the good fanfics just doing whatever they wan't without any common sense, NO! So if you would have the first gym leader with a...

The link doesn't work Samson. And it wouldn't be useful, considering if you put a link in a place like this to a Gamefaqs guide, it wouldn't work since you can only read Gamefaqs guides from the Gamefaqs site. But yeah, search on www.gamefaqs.com and go to the DS section, click on Pokemon...

Probalay not on April 22's main release date, since us Canadians would get it a couple of days after most likely. Then I'd most likely get it the first day it comes out in one of the stores near where I live.

This chapter wasn't one bit interesting. First catch, hi, all trainers catch a pokemon on the first route usually. Plus the Wurmple VS Wurmple fight was pretty pointless and just put in there to add something to this chapter. Now I edit that You see what happens when you put some more...

Okay in reality, they would never give out a rare pokemon like Eevee and Pikachu in a lab. Pikachu can't even be found in Johto, Eevee is just something for Mary-sues most of the time. Sadly your Pikachu resembles Ash's, it is completey uberish, super fast, powerful thunder shock. Sadly you...

To add on to that, you have to gain some speed with the mach bike to do anything on those cracked floors, and be prepared to make sudden turns and sudden stops while there.

Umm the interesting stuff would be good anytime now. Your plot seems to currently be the standard RPG handheld game plot, you've just added in the main character's sister as his partner. Plus you've got the same whole friendly rival deal with absoluity nothing interseting about her. Describing...

Considering you've only got them leaving their house so far to go on their journey, there's not very much to look at. Your description isn't bad, although it could be improved. His hair was a navy shade of blue while his eyes were a lighter shade of blue, than navy. He got out and opened the...

When you defeat/capture any of the two Snorlax's, search in the spot they were sleeping on to get the Leftovers.

This is what you need-https://www.serebii.net/red_green/pokemon.shtml

Where your having everybody contribute to it, but they must have semi-good writing skills, it's kinda like how one of the RPG's works. First you'd have to make sure that your writers would be committed to work on the project, second you'd have to still make the plot a bit more interseting {Ex...

Read the Rules sticky, and the Writer's Lounge stickies please. This comes out as a standard Pokemon Trainer Game Plot without any originality in the plot or the trainer. There is no description into the characters, the pokemon or the attacks and this was completley rushed.

You do realize that only fan-fiction and poetry is allowed in this forum, yeah you don't. Now think about what you've done while I report this.