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August 9th, 2008 (6:50 AM).
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Rofl at the end. xD That was funny.
I only saw one error, and that was when Hikari was taking the stage. You put round of "applaud" rather than "applause". But, other than that, nothing noticed. :D
I must have been to involved in her story to notice that error.
She is good at making the reader "mesmerized" by the story - or at least me.
Yep, the ending was funny.
Another Baa.Baa.Blacksheep. original ending (
now with a copyright
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