Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old February 4th, 2009 (08:27 PM).
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Delongbi: Whoa. I never knew how many grammar issues I had! Seeing them is making me a bit embarrassed. I’ll have to triple check (and then triple check again!) later chapters to make sure I kill all the mistakes. Thanks a bunch for pointing them out or I’d probably never notice them!

I’m glad you liked the story and yeah, Ed’s an awesome kid and I love writing him and Leah. Though Ally is kind of awkward to write since she’s a shy character, but she should be getting more of a personality in the next few chapters.

Chapters three and four are already done, but I’m going to have to go over both of them with a magnifying glass. I hope I’ll get chapter three up by Friday or Saturday, though probably Saturday.

Thanks for taking your time to review!
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