Delongbi: Whoa. I never knew how many grammar issues I had! Seeing them is making me a bit embarrassed. I’ll have to triple check (and then triple check again!) later chapters to make sure I kill all the mistakes. Thanks a bunch for pointing them out or I’d probably never notice them!
I’m glad you liked the story and yeah, Ed’s an awesome kid and I love writing him and Leah. Though Ally is kind of awkward to write since she’s a shy character, but she should be getting more of a personality in the next few chapters.
Chapters three and four are already done, but I’m going to have to go over both of them with a magnifying glass. I hope I’ll get chapter three up by Friday or Saturday, though probably Saturday.
Thanks for taking your time to review!