Pokemon Fire Red Omega (Yes, I'm shameless)

Kenpokid

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    Yeah, these will be short updates.
    Don't expect vulgarity :P


    EPISODE 1
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    Next episode, should be longer, and we name Smoochum and battle GREEN. Oh, and I'll try (and more than likely fail) to catch a Ralts. Yes, I'm a sucker for Psychic-types.
     
    This LP could be improved on. A lot of your jokes fall flat because they're very predictable, or have been done a lot already. You have very few images as well - didn't even capture a single part of the conversation with Oak and Gary in the lab.
    Also, but these may just be personal preferences, I wouldn't have picked a starter before asking the readers which one they want. I also wouldn't announce what I'm going to catch in the next update, that just ruins the surprise.

    That aside, I do appreciate the fact that you're using proper English and no immature jokes. I'm sure this LP could be better if you put some work into it.
    Good luck!
     
    Blah. I don't go COMPLETELY by what the viewers want, honestly, mostly the nicknames. And Ralts is the only one I'll reveal, don't worry :P
    Also, I'm trying to go with some of the more cliché jokes (besides the Oak Intro ones) to mock other LPs - like I said, I'm shameless ;P
    And I only show parts of conversations I can make a joke of - such as Gym Leader or Trainer lines.
     
    Don't worry about Ralts, Dray was nice enough so make it so that it knows confusion at level 1 and nothing else :D

    Good Luck
     
    Yeah, I know, I watched an LP as well as reading yours. And it appears at level 5, not 1.
    But seriously.
    What do I name Smoochum? :l
     
    Name for the Smoochum

    Name it WBGarevoir or Gorlash the Kitten Slayer! :D
     
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