I just wanted to point out that since this is a FR hack, shouldn't the text be coloured?
Otherwise it's pretty obvious that this is a script from a signpost/tile/level script.
Oh, and I notice that you made a custom cave entrance for the mountain. It's really cool, and it blends in perfectly with the Fire Red style. :3
Keep up the good work!
EDIT: Oh, and it's pretty cool that we have a wide range of starters. Since most games only give you a choice of three, if you pick the wrong one, you're screwed. However, there's a lot more choice here, and I love it. :3