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Old June 2nd, 2011, 12:44 PM
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D. Lawride
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I gotta say, the story does sound pretty interesting, even though, you only approached some points of it. :3

You could try adding in some more sections, such as Features (which isn't necessarily an xpto device the player has) or even some details about where the story is set.

I'll be following if this develops! :D
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