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Old January 21st, 2012, 04:45 PM
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Connecticut, USA
Age: 27
Gender: Male
My first fanfic was horrible. I have to specify "fanfic" because the original work I used to write when I was younger was at least salvageable. But my first fanfic... Yeesh. There was no description at all. I had pages and pages of dialogue but no narration or character thoughts. It was ridiculous.

Now, I focus more on character thoughts than dialogue. It was a complete switch-around.