Got a couple more things to report:
Missing out an apostrophe in won't: http://d.pr/RJM4+
I don't think adventurer should be capitalised, and 'pleasent' should be pleasant: http://d.pr/lDXq+
I'm not sure what's going on around the edges here: http://d.pr/L6Pg+
And finally, it feels like the difficulty ramps up quite quickly, and early. Kane's (I named my rival Gary, but is this a different person altogether?) Kadabra, and most of the trainers on Empire Isle were very difficult to defeat. My team consists of a Treecko, a Machop and a Spearow, all level 15 and it took my quite a bit of abuse with save states to beat these guys. It was quite frustrating for me anyway, I don't know how anyone else feels.