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Old November 3rd, 2012 (12:37 PM). Edited November 3rd, 2012 by Zayphora.
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Join Date: Apr 2012
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I guess I should post my opinion...

Well, Drgons, I think yours is a very cool premise, but I think it needs fleshed out a little more. Yes, the more I think about it, Bannetes do fit in very well with the world of AbandonPasta, as I like to call it, but I think you could have gone into more detail about how exactly a Bannete got into our world. Funny, your pasta reminded me of this other pasta that I've seen, called "The Bannete Killer" in which Looker gets murdered by a

Yeah, I would most likely vote for Seeker. I really have a thing about Creepy Black, and it fits in nicely with my own canon for my fanfic. (Make what spoiler out of that you will.). Also, very well written. :D
*just noticed* Is the demonic Pikachu described in your pasta the one from "Snow on Mount Silver?" it certainly sounds like it.