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Sorry about the awkward start by the way. xP I've already told you some of my thoughts on this, and the previous versions, but anyways;
Anyways, I really like what you've done with the colours of this piece. Normally I don't opt for bright pink colours schemes, but I think you've worked it in well, and it definitely works with the tag!
The text is something that I will elaborate on in here, although you know the general gist of it. On first looking, I really detested the text, mainly because putting text, centred, and completely over the stock image, is rarely a good idea. However, once I looked around the canvas a little more, the text seemed to blend in quite amazingly, and then I started seeing it as writing on his T-Shirt. So the text I feel is actually blending really well whether that was the intention or not xP
One thing I would suggest though, is to move it down. I feel, that I am seeing it this way, that it is sitting too high to be T-Shirt text, and you've got a bit of wiggle room underneath it's current position. I'd go hard along the bottom axis.
Lastly, the rainbow-nebula-smudge. I feel this is a little half-done, maybe a bit lazy, premature or something. At the moment, I'm thinking like Aurora Borealis (Northern Lights) which is ok, but in terms of the actual tag, it feels wonky. Firstly because it doesn't really create any real flow, and I'd argue it could go with a lot more of that effect. Those are those stocks with the smudge on there from memory, you could pile up a few more and create some flow and help blend in his shoulders a fraction would look good!
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I actually quite liked your sort of, washed out, bit sort of blurry, smooth colour scheme in this one. Although this version is definitely a step up from the version you sent me. Anyways, the sharpening and blurring on this one is quite amazing. I am a sucker for really sharp tags, which is why I went overboard, but I think you've nailed it!
One thing which I didn't like, and I actually erased some in my version, is that circle masked thing around his shoulders. I felt it was good at blending him into the background a little more, but where it touches his face, I feel is a no-go. I feel it is sort of intruding, and making his face a little less obvious by blending it more. It's easily fixed though, I just put a 100px~ soft eraser and clicked near his face, just to clean it up a bit.
The text, well first of all, this stock doesn't like text. xP I struggled to find a spot that really liked the text, but they were all sort of neutral... What you've done here isn't bad, but it does feel slightly awkward as it is completely over the stock (like I mentioned in the last comment). When you don't look at it, it sits comfortably, but when you actually move your eyes over it, it looks a little awkward... I can't really suggest any different positions because I struggled a bit myself, but if you went like 10px up, and then tuck the 'n' into that little nook, immediately left of the 'R' now, it might fit there nicely.
Just a minor thing, immediately left of the text, there are some spots in his armour which are like bright blue, when I think they should be black. Looks like you've done a Selective Colour for Blacks, and pumped up the blues only in that area. The blue hasn't got enough greens/yellows in it and it is not sitting well with the rest of the tag, and if you look at it, it actually is quite distracting.
But yeah, good work!