Awesome lol, 30 pages should be enough. And if not I have the reserved post xD
I'll write another section here soon, atm Im playing w/ my i***** since I just jailbroke it.
Edit: There, got another section written. Sorry there wasn't an update yesterday, life happened. But anyways please comment all you'd like, I appreciate all of it. Constructive criticism is welcomed, but know the difference between dogging someone and being constructive.