Thread: [Developing] Pokemon: Mystical Grief
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Old March 24th, 2013 (12:30 PM). Edited March 24th, 2013 by Silversnk.
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Quote originally posted by ChaosLord:
I understand that, it just didn't make sense when you said "Elarosa is famous for being a retire place for most trainers, here you'll find the toughest and more experienced trainers in this side of the world". The underlined is what gives the whole Lv.5 starter Pokemon thing off.
Yeah, you're right, I think I was too inspired when I wrote that (?), I'll change it then for "Elarosa is famous for being a touristical place, also a lot of trainers from all around the world come here to prove their skills in front of Elarosa Pokémon League."

Hope That's Better! I'll be updating soon.
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