Nico Nico Nii!~
Sorry for the delay on looking at this in detail (I've been at a convention all weekend), but now Profen seems to have beaten me to most of the critique, which I actually greatly appreciate.
One thing I noticed when skimming your suggestion post, Profen, is that you suggested that Bouffalant could be charged up in 3 turns or less because of Colress Machine, but Colress Machine can only attach energy to Team Plasma Pokemon, and the Gold Breaker Bouffalant is not a Team Plasma Pokemon. Just thought I'd drop that in so neither one of you gets in trouble for a misplay. I agree with the bulk of the rest of the critique, though.