Here is my character. Can you tell me if it's good?
Name: Sarah Lonoran
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Apperance: Sarah has long,dark, red hair that reaches down to her waist and she also has blue eyes. She wears a light pink, martial arts shirt with the stripes aqua blue. She wears blue jeans and a light pink belt. Her shoes are pink and white and her socks are pure white. she wears aqua blue gloves also.
History: Sarah was born to a family of four. Her mother died when she was given birth, so she never got to meet her. She has an older brother, Danny Lonoran. He works at a repair shop where they repair any type of cars. Her father, Anthony Lonoran, just died three years ago in a car accident. Her brother is 18 years old, so he takes care of her.
Sarah does all the house chores. Sarah meet Salamon when she was 12 years old. She found her egg in a tree and took her home. She catched two weeks later and she raised her ever since. Sarah grew up as a short person, so people tease her of her height. She gives Salamon a name and calls her Lily.
Personality: Sarah likes writing, reading, and gymnastics. She goes to a martial arts dojo everyday after school to improve herself. She hate bullies, when somebody hurts her friends, and when somebody teases her of her height. She loves sweets and martial arts. Sarah acts tough around strangers, but when she grows to know them, she gains their trust and is sweet and kind around them.
She has anger issues and she doesn't tolerate when somebody tries to boss her around. She has a mind of her own and when she has a goal, she will go for it and not give up. She has few friends because of other students scared of her hitting them. She hates it when somebody does something bad around her and they think she will punch them. She has a heart of gold and she will help her friends no matter what.
Digimon: Lily/Salamon
Level: 12
Appearance: The only difference is that she wears a white scarf around her neck.
Personality: Lily has the same personality as Sarah, tough on the outside, but sweet on the inside, but the only difference is that her Lily doesn't have an anger issue.
Already Obtained: Yes
URL:
https://hapuriainen.deviantart.com/art/AC2012-25-Digimon-character-creator-344658228
This is where I did my character. I give credit to the person who made the game. ^^