ckret2
usually pronounced "secret 2"
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I'm not looking for a full-out beta, but wanted some feedback on an untitled fic idea I have and on the... unusual formatting I'm using for it. I've got the first couple of scenes below, and wanna see what other people think of it.
Rough concept of the fic: it's a backstory for Cyrus, mainly from ages 10 to 18, with a few scenes from before and a few scenes from after, up to the end of his involvement in Platinum. I'm characterizing him as schizophrenic, and trying to filter his personality, motivations, and actions through that mental disorder in a way that makes sense. For people who don't enjoy spending hours looking up mental disorders like I do: schizophrenia is the disorder where you hear voices and see things that aren't there, not the disorder where you have multiple personalities or the disorder where you have an uncontrollable urge to kill things.
It isn't an angsty fic (although it won't be very cheerful) and it's definitely not a comedy; more than anything, it's a psychological fic, including a bunch of conspiracy theories that may or may not be imaginary.
I'm going to be hopping all around chronology-wise in the fic, but for the time being here are the two scenes that I think will be the first of the fic. It's got some weird formatting which relies on font color, and since there are about a million different background styles on PC and only about half of them would be compatible with this fic, I'm linking these two scenes off of PC.
Warnings: Crude language. F-bombs and s-bombs, pretty much, because headvoices are not known for politeness.
Untitled W.I.P. - Schizophrenic Cyrus
Anybody have any ideas on it?
Rough concept of the fic: it's a backstory for Cyrus, mainly from ages 10 to 18, with a few scenes from before and a few scenes from after, up to the end of his involvement in Platinum. I'm characterizing him as schizophrenic, and trying to filter his personality, motivations, and actions through that mental disorder in a way that makes sense. For people who don't enjoy spending hours looking up mental disorders like I do: schizophrenia is the disorder where you hear voices and see things that aren't there, not the disorder where you have multiple personalities or the disorder where you have an uncontrollable urge to kill things.
It isn't an angsty fic (although it won't be very cheerful) and it's definitely not a comedy; more than anything, it's a psychological fic, including a bunch of conspiracy theories that may or may not be imaginary.
I'm going to be hopping all around chronology-wise in the fic, but for the time being here are the two scenes that I think will be the first of the fic. It's got some weird formatting which relies on font color, and since there are about a million different background styles on PC and only about half of them would be compatible with this fic, I'm linking these two scenes off of PC.
Warnings: Crude language. F-bombs and s-bombs, pretty much, because headvoices are not known for politeness.
Untitled W.I.P. - Schizophrenic Cyrus
Anybody have any ideas on it?