Pokepark Sprite comic

This is a pretty awesome comic. It's a good thing I posted before one month was up.

lol this is well good when you Posting your next one?

This is a mess. I can't tell what's going on at any point in time and the panels are spread out all over the place. Why not just put them side-by-side?

A note to say that this comic is now on hiatus(as if it wasn't while I was gone.Heh)until further notice.Read my sig for details.

For those of you think I'm just sitting there trying to fool you,well you're wrong!
To show you what I'm working on I'm going to upload a sneak peek from time to time to show you anything new underway.

So sneak peek #1 away!:

LMAO masterball.....pg-14 indeed....
Other than that I get theres a hand but why? and umm why does May faint at the site of the main char?
and LOL catches the infatuated mudkip then punts it...
comes back and catches the hand....man its funny but it took abit to understand most of it
EDIT: just an idea you might want to change the background for pokepark all those pokemon look cluttered, than to top that off the writing is in red so it sort of blends in with the poke's. (not too big a deal becuase you write the titles right above the comics but still...(and it's only for comic 3 so it's even better if you understand it)

heh...masterball
anyway may had fainted because of the hand of course because who in the world of pokemon has ever seen a large floating white hand and besides handy's backstory will be revealed in due and/or undue time.I'm glad you enjoyed my work!I still don't know about user banners though...

THE HIATUS IS OVER

Finally.It took awhile but I got the comics made but I have good news and bad news.The bad news is I'm under a tight schedule and can only update once a week and the good news is the comics are now 6 panels long!Anyway, Enjoy.

LOL, plot device teddy! That was so funny!

Sorry I took so long so you get two comics to make up for it.

I got this weeks update up.Wasn't very hard to make except for the last panel.

Erm. Its a little, strange...
Although I like the effect used when the ursarang destroyed may. Heh.
Still, this particular comic is weird. :cer_no:

It felt weird too while I read over it but it is necessary to move the plot along...so yeah.It took me some time to get that Hyper Beam just right so it looked awesome in the end.Looks like it worked.:)

Edit:

Got comic 10 up aas well as a banner!Yay!I also made a new archive system with the spoiler tags.

Edit:SUPRISE UPDATE!!!Heh.I didn't want to make you guys feel annoyed as you waited a week and got this lousy update.But atleast you learned something about Pokemon, right?Anyway, hope you like it.

Edit:

Hey everybody.Sorry to keep on *counts posts* quadruple posting like this but this is important.I'm am currently looking for an assistant author to review premade comics and make comics when I'm away.If you think your up too it just PM me with your current comic making skills as well as an example of it as a sample comic(four panels or more).You must be commited and truthful if you want to give feedback as an assistant and be oblidged to help me out.
The applications are allowed until I actually find a suitable assistant.
Oh yeah just a little question.Where can you find PMD sprites and RSE route sprites since spriters resource is down.

Edit: Comic 12 is up along with suspense!

Edit:Hey there guys.New comic up and it is important.Seriously.If your fans of Pokepark I really recommend you go read it.
Also would you guys like support banners?

Edit:New comic is up!Not suitable for my younger readers though, sorry you guys.

Oh lord, I am glad you PM'd me.

I have been looking a this comic in and out a few times, even before it went on hiatus, and I can truly saw you've improved,
You could use some better text bubbles,
but overall, your humor and storyline structure is improving!
You could still improve, but it's improving!

I genuinely chuckled!

I really am looking forward for more.
You have major comic master potential.
Let's see if you reach it.

(Oh, and, you might want to merge those 7 posts so the mods down flip a ship)

Thanks for the review. Good to know you like it.
Anyways I got a new comic up, introducing the anti-heroes or villians.I consider this one a meh comic though, it seems like I effect *****d it a bit too much.

Go Back To How You Displayed It Before!!! I hate it this way!