Oh, i understand you! like Luka's vs seq.?
Update!
2 stories instead of 1 and i am making a pool by asking which is your favorite!
Both of them are horrible. They lack explanation, detail and suspense buildup.
One day at the Sinnoh Region, the people felt scared cause of something strange, more than strange. I tell you what ?
That sentence doesn't even make grammatical sense.
Okay! Team Galactic/Galaxy controlled Dialga, and Team Rocket controlled Palkia, and still destroying (not the whole sinnoh) They destroyed some cities and some towns
Again, terrible grammar. What is the goal of these teams in destroying the Sinnoh Region?
ave moved into the Ueno region, that is full of joy
Why is this region "full of joy"?
The News: Sinnoh region is being destroyed soon, so move to an another region.
So everyone knows their home is about to be destroyed and they aren't doing anything about it?
some people didn't hear the news
HOW can someone not hear such monumental news? Provided they have a TV/Radio, that is, which most people in Sinnoh do.
Team Rocket destroyed the camera to make everybody die.
I think I just died.
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This image
That is not Professor Oak, that's Professor Rowan.
Also, mixing tile styles is a horrible idea, stick to tiles from one "Generation" of Pokemon, the 4th being the best choice here.
One of the artists whose tiles you used is named "Alucus", by the way, not "Alacus" and stealing is looked down upon, very harshly. All you have to do is write a line of text, under the header "Credits". Most everyone knows whose tiles were used and no one is going to envy you, because you allegedly made a couple of tiles