It looks unorganized, and I'm frankly creeped out by the main image. Text is also odd. Maybe capitalizing and getting rid of the space before the question mark would make it look slightly better, but if it's still unmoved in that position I'd probably just remove the text. Also, maybe you can streamline its contents in a better way. After all, it's not that bad.
5/10
Ninja'd.
Yours is okay, I'm alright with Akuroma. The image quality looks slightly stretched, of course there aren't really much available clean renders of him lately so it's alright. Oh yeah, the line containing the two Oshawott may possibly look better at the most bottom instead.
8/10