Honestly, I don't see the appeal to this hack.
First of all, the whole G/S/C remake thing has been done to death, and though I hate hearing this myself, HGSS is coming to the states and Europe in a couple of months.
Judging by your screenshots, you lack a basic grasp of the English language. What makes it worse is all of the correct text is already written for you if you just pop G/S/C into your Gameboy or grab a ROM. Your maps of New Bark Town are... well... let's just say you need some practice, to put it lightly.
The fact that you've restarted signals me that perhaps this doesn't belong in the Progressing Hacks section, because as far as your posts are concerned, it seems that from the time you've started over, you haven't made enough progress to stay in this section. Honestly, I can't see any serious reason to play this, other than chuckling at the bad grammar or seeing the Silver Version we all know and love slaughtered.
I'd read a mapping tutorial, put some effort into your grammar (which like I said before was done for you if you had cared to look), and learn some more advanced scripting before even attempting to ruin a Nintendo game. I believe this belongs back in the Scrapbox with the other "crap or scrap", as you so delicately put it in one of your posts, to be phased-out with the rest of the products of this "Hacking Dark Age".
