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RMXP - Pokemon Shiny Diamond

What starters do you want?

  • Bulbasaur/Charmander/Squirtle

    Votes: 6 11.3%

  • Chikorita/Cyndaquil/Totodile

    Votes: 18 34.0%

  • Treecko/Torchic/Mudkip

    Votes: 11 20.8%

  • Turtwig/Chimchar/Piplup

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TheMarkCrafter

roses are red, violets are blue, i used to break r
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    RMXP - Pokemon Shiny Diamond (improved)

    [PokeCommunity.com] RMXP - Pokemon Shiny Diamond

    Thanks for elaynii to give me the logo..
    The legend of Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina is beginning..
    Introduction
    Finally!

    After four grueling years, you -being either Dawn or Lucas- are going to graduate high school! The excitement is in the air as your mother and all of your new friends achieve most prominent things you've ever done. Well, aside from stopping a deranged man from destroying the world in order to create a new, pure one.. graduating high school is pretty close though! As the principle calls your name, you feel your heart thudding in your chest as your make your way up to the stage. As that simple, yet unimaginably important piece of paper is laid into your hands, you can hear the crowd, along with your friends going wild!

    The ceremony is over, and now, all of the thrills of high school are as well. Now, all there is to do is go home and find a job. Right then and there, you decide that you are definitely not going to work. There's got to be something else you could do! You could always hand around the house, right? Wrong. Your mother would probably urge you to go out and get a job. As you lay in bed, deciding what to do, you hear a small purr. It was your mother's Glameow. At that moment, you knew what you had to do. Sinnoh wasn't the only region out there, right? There was Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Unova.. There had to be somewhere else! Wait, there is that newly discovered region of Ueno! That is where you will be going to Ueno to become a Pokémon Trainer once more and make some new friends and allies along with some new Pokémon!
    Story
    As you enter the new new region of Ueno, you will see many familier faces...
    Team Plasma, now have a new boss, N, a crazed worshipper, of Giratina, who is determined, to put the world under his feet.
    As he try's to perfect his new super weapon, the only way, which is to summon Arceus and absorb his powers, he releases an army of mutant Pokemon upon Ueno, to stall the military.
    Then he sets out to the other regions and starts killing gym leaders. After awhile, he comes back, having been spoken to by Giratina, he is determined to capture you, for you hold the key to Ueno's fate.
    In the end you will have to choose, will you join Team Plasma, and be a ruler of the world, or will you fight and resist, the choice is yours.​
    Screenies
    Spoiler:


    Credits
    Poccil ~ Pokemon Essentials
    venom12 ~ Pokemon Essentials DS & OWs
    Neo-Spriteman ~ New BW Tiles
    Neo-Spriteman ~ Resized Tiles and Trainer Sprites
    ~~~~~Pkmn essentials DS credits~~~~~
    Luka ~ VS Seq. and mouse model and etc...
    Cybersam and Astro ~ Mouse model
    CNG ~ Battle moves select menu
    Help14 ~ Pokedex
    Wichu ~ Sprites
    FL. ~ Eggs Change and Unova Pokemon
    ~~~~~Help with Neo-Spriteman~~~~~
    Dewitty, Kymontian, Calis Project, Bulbapedia.net ~ Help
    Dewitty, Bulbapedia.Bulbagarden.net, Nintendo, Chocosrawloid, Kymotonian, milomilotic11, and Neo-Spriteman ~ Pokemon BW Trainers
    ~~~~~Inner Tiles~~~~~
    Thurpok ~ Inner tiles Lost to credit Thurpok cuz i lost his name.
    -----Other-----
    tebited15 from deviantart ~ Lucas' sprite! (He said no need for credit..)
    Team
    Me ~ Everything
    None ~ Mapper (HIGHEST NEED) 3 places
    None ~ Scripter (HIGHEST NEED) 3 places
    Me ~ Spriter (HIGHEST NEED) 2 places
    Me ~ Beta Tester 0 places
    Elaynni ~ Introduction and Logo, hope you like them!
    Flamemaster ~ Story
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    [url=https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/6602030/][img]https://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1720/ubd9282.png[/img][/url]

    Pokemon Shiny Diamond: Playing means fun!

    Here, visit this link to see new features!
    https://pokemonshinydiamond.wordpress.com

    Features
    Archivements
    iPhone instead of Pokegear
    New Region
    VS sequences
    BW Tiles
    A bridge that connects between Ueno and Miho regions​

    ------------
    Archivements
    Name: Poke-Kick
    HowToGet: Kick a Caterpie at Sunring Town
    Prize: Potion

    Name: Gimmie-A-Gift!
    HowToGet: Get a Ditto from the Mystery gift man at Bigcorn's Pokecenter
    Prize: Tiny Mushroom

    Name: xD
    HowToGet: Answer Vinertion's Man that ask questions all wrong
    Prize: RageCandyBar and Galactic Key

    Name: Eevee
    HowToGet: Get back the Stolen Eevee from Team Plasma
    Prize: All Eevee evolutions
    ​
     
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    KingSnivy said:
    Tell me, is my story okay now or still boring?
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    Very boring. Its basically what you had before condensed into a few sentences.

    Also, you credit them for their tiles, not their help unless they specifically told you how to do things.

    And use image tags, please
     
    WTh, your other thread was closed, because of not given the right credits... so you go make another one?

    Atleast this time you have the right credits.
    Although bit a of a improvement... with the tiles.. but mapping and grammar still need a massive improvement...

    Your mapping style is very weird, try copy the style Nintendo, GAMEFREAK use..
     
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    At least you gave credits now. Your maps look awkward and too spacious. The houses in games aren't that big. I suggest looking at some mapping tutorials, or hire a new mapper. Capitalization, grammar, and spelling are my main pet peeves. Fix those things and your game looks decent graphic-wise.

    As for your story,
    Code: 
    One day, you have finished the High School. [B]Good for you. What about it?[/B] 
and decided to go to an another adventure to an another region that is called Ueno. [B]You've gone on previous adventures? Was this where the high school was?[/B]
and Team Galactic decided to stop Lucas and Dawn to protect the regions[B]Lolwut? Where'd Lucas and Dawn come from?[/B].
Will you defeat Team Galactic and save Ueno?[B]What are their plans?[/B]
     
    Here is my opinion:

    Your plot doesn't sound interesting. I agree with the others by saying your maps are too wide open. I suggest condensing your maps and either A) Add depth to your current plot( You have a starting point but you need to make it interesting)
    B) Create a new and more interesting Plot or C) Recruit someone else to write a plot for you.

    The Yagerbomb has been dropped.
     
    Here's the trainer maker i used:
    <object width="450" height="386"><param name="movie" value="https://backend.deviantart.com/embed/view.swf" /><param name="flashvars" value="id=75399413&width=1337" /><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always" /><embed src="https://backend.deviantart.com/embed/view.swf" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="450" flashvars="id=75399413&width=1337" height="386" allowscriptaccess="always"></embed></object><br /><a href="https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/75399413/">Pokemon Trainer Creator</a> by ~<a class="u" href="https://magicalgirlyossy.deviantart.com/">MagicalGirlYossy</a> on <a href="https://www.deviantart.com">deviant</a><a href="https://www.deviantart.com">ART</a>

    Here's the trainer maker i used:
    https://www.deviantart.com/download/75399413/Pokemon_Trainer_Creator_by_MagicalGirlYossy.swf
     
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    ProdigyX said:
    Do you take any thought about other peoples post to improve your much need improvement game?
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    It would seem not...

    So I'm going to make a comment that's going to be wholly ignored, but what do I care.
    The story is dull, boring and in no way make any sense, whatsoever.
    PLEASE read these comments and improve, because it seems like you might have some ideas, but you're not presenting them.
     
    @lx theo
    @ProdigyX
    @xCalierz

    I updated the story. What do you think guys?

    Oh my! I forgot the Features!
    New Region
    New Attacks
    Some Fakemon
    Meet Trainers, Leadera, and Elite 4 from the other 4 regions!
    And Progress!
    UENO [||||________] 25% Releasing Beta soon!
    BETA 1 [||||||||||||||___] 97% Editing things! Download link will be at first post or some posts!
     
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    @xCalierz
    The first adventure is at Sunring Town.

    btw.
    carmaniac didn't post here!
     
    You get to Mt. Gold and battle team Galactic and they escape. But that's not the last time, it's the first. And you go to an Adventure and go to the Victory Road and you see them the last time. and then they escape, and battle Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, the grunts, and Cyrus and then you see Mark, your rival. The last time. His sprite at my avatar.
     
    KingSnivy, the only way you're going to improve your game, is by listening to other people's criticism. They're only trying to help you, and you ignore them.
     
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