Glitter Stain
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Thanks. I didn't think about this possibly being a song, but I guess you're right.Woah, that is actually really good. It kind of sounds like lyrics to a song. That would be a great song:) Remember just too add fullstops at the end of the sentences, so it is readable/singable.
Well, thanks for your comment. I'm glad to know that you'd be the one to open the box. XDOops...i opened it...
Dude-tte, that was seriously awesome, and gave me the chills; i'd be the one to open it.
Shorten this line.Because of curiosity and a knife
So please, next time
You need to commit
When a box says DO NOT OPEN
Don't open it.
Thanks for your comment. And, XD, cute boxes.Shorten this line.
I thought that I ought to shorten the line. I'm working on it, but I don't think it's that distracting whether I change it or not.
This stanza is by far the cutest thing I have ever read about boxes. Ever.
Thanks, I didn't think it was incredible. XDthis is incredible. i never would thought of something great with a box. good job