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Lonley.

Ciera

This is a tragedy.
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  • Ok, so being totally and utterly alone wasn't what I expected. It's so quiet, and there's no one to talk to. No one to ask, "Does this make me look fat?" No one to cuddle with on a cold night...

    ...I love it.

    The quiet gives me more time to think, and less talking saves oxygen. The mirror can tell me if a dress makes me look fat, I don't need people to lie to me about that. And a heater can warm my house when it's cold.

    Being totally and utterly alone was the best part of my life. Until I got sick and almost hacked up a lung and kidney. Ok, maybe not a kidney. But I was **** close.

    It stayed dark for forty-seven days, and forty-eight nights, straight, no sunlight, nothing. At least, on the small world of Ta'koru, that was normal. I think. I found a dog!

    The poeple left the planet. They got tired of the dark. They left animals and food and transportation; they loaded into large boat transport and shoom! They were off. I stayed...no one objected. I have free food, at least, now.

    Doggy's name is Carlton Shepardson. He likes his name. He is my best friend, now that the people left.

    We sleep in a big house, in the middle of the only city on the tiny planet. We eat what we grow; vegtables, fruits. We raise chickens. Carlton Sheperdson herds them like a pro, straight to slaughter.

    ((A spelling mistake here, or there, it's fine. The format of this is supposed to be the way I made it, and I'm too empty to write anymore today...DOn't be mean! ;-; ))
     
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  • It's kinda sad -cries- You have done an fantastic job with this story.
    It's very impressive and I hope to be able to read more of your stories in the near future. =)
     

    Kyosuke

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  • Hmm very nice ^^, you really kept the dramatic mood thoughout the whole story and I'm really interested to see where this one goes.

    Great job ^^'
     
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    • Age 32
    • Seen Mar 18, 2006
    kinda sad but still a pretty good story.
    adnik das tub llist a ytterp doog yrots.
     
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