A bit small for me, but oh well. Otherwise, it looks nice. Did you use Mewtwo's sprite's palette, or create a new one?Those sprites up there are very good.
Here's my newest:
Please give me any pro-comment on how can I improve it.
Ah! I noticed what you meant. So, I fixed a few things.Looks really nice. There are some outlines missing (his left arm, right If you look it front). If you look at the sprite, light's coming from left to right, so darker outlines should be on the right. On the right orange thing coming out of his cheek, the middle one should be pointier, instead of round. I know it's smaller but I keep looking at that point as odd. Parts circled in red are the ones I think that need to be fixed.
Also, a more saturated blue would fit it very nicely. Good work :)
PD: the pallete is of my own
Well, here's my comment. His outline still looks messy. It looks dotted especially that part of his round head. It's so rough and looks a little distorted. (Like when you take a large sprite and resizing it without anti-aliasing). I suggest making it smoother. On the tail though, since it's an actual bolt (or I misunderstood it that it should just LOOK LIKE a Bolt like Pikachu's) shouldn't a light be illuminating from it? Or you can even try to make it a little longer to get the shape of a bolt even just a little. Also when I didn't read your post first and just cluelessly looked at your sprite, shhh.... I thought it was its di** Hahah! :P :)May get some feedback on this sprite?
It's one of my fakes, Pispark. The little yellow nub between its legs is its tail, it wouldn't come out like the little bolt its supposed to be so, I just winged it. ^^; Anyways, I'm still learning how to properly sprite and I've gotten it down for the most part. I just have trouble getting the outlines right. Obviously. I've gotten quite a few helpful tips from people, but no matter how hard I try, I can never get it right. xD; Anyways, some constructive criticism is much appreciated.
Hence why I mentioned it was a tail. ^^;
It's supposed to look like a lightning bolt, I should have elaborated on that. Here is a version where the head isn't outlined and I lengthened the tail. I can't make it longer, otherwise it wouldn't match up with the artwork.
