Just gonna butt in here and tell you as apposed to sending out multiple; don't forget about the four line rule guys. Fuyu and PkMnTrainer Yellow's last few posts have been a little lacking for the last few posts! I know it gets hard when it's just dialogue between two characters, but try and include details. I find it helps if I make my characters do a little more, you know? Scratch, twitch, shuffle a bit, etc. Or perhaps take in more of your surroundings without being too dull.
Please try and keep the quality up, alrighty? <: