Oh my god. You have SO much work to do.
Firstly, your maps are too empty and dull.
Secondly, why have you mixed rtp and zelda chips?
Thirdly, dialogue is bad.
Fourthly, who would use the DBS for a Zelda game!? I mean come on! That's lazy! Make an ABS!
Fifthly, give this project up, and go and play some games that other people have made. Then, when you know how to map, and stuff. THEN! Make a game.
Sorry about the harshness, but I have to get my point through. ;)