Pokemon: Shroud of Darkness

The Story:
After being escaping a near death experience against the leviathan, our hero Max finds himself filled with revenge. And won't stop until his traitor freind Hunter and the leviathan are dead.


Left to Right
Character:Rale Bio: One of hunters devoted servents. Not much is known about him.
Age: 35
Pokemon: Shadow Groudon, Cosmain
Character:Blake
Bio: Hunters most trusted servent. He has a very special freindship with Rale.
Age: 17
Pokemon: Shadow Groudon, Cosmain
Character: Max (centre)
Bio: The main character. He was betrayed by hunter. Little more is known.
Age:16
Pokemon: Thydoun, Kingler, Ultimate Latios
Character: Hunter (far right)
Bio: He is the conrtols the power leviathan, a powerful legendary pokemon which is described in ancient scripters as 'The god of darkness'.
Age:22
Pokemon: S.Lugia
Character: Ryan
Bio: Once was Hunter's minions. Little is known about him accept he is after Hunter.
Age: Unkown
Pokemon: Shadowfox, sheldon, Leviathan
Character: Amy
Bio: Amy is one of max's closest freinds. And she is in love with water pokemon.
Age: 15
Pokemon: Blastoise, Tentacrule
CHaracter: Adam
Bio: This mysterious character is Hunter's most skilled assasin. Little us known about him.
Age: Unknown
Pokemon: Shadow Mew

SEASON 1
PART 1
Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3
Comic 4
Comic 5
Comic 6
Comic 7
Comic 8
Comic 9
Comic 10
Comic 11
Comic 12
Comic 13
Comic 14 (meanwhile)
Comic 15
Comic 16
Comic 17

PART 2 (New Layout)
Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3
Comic 4
Season Finale

SEASON 2
PART 1
Comic 1
Comic 2

It's not bad I enjoyed reading it. Though you should add to the Bios which color text each character is so it's not to confusing.

Houndoom1 said:

It's not bad I enjoyed reading it. Though you should add to the Bios which color text each character is so it's not to confusing.

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Yes,that would help the other people,but a good comic.

Good comic! I like the recolours! I have a shadow lugia recolour with someone sitting on it if you'ld ever need it =D Looks good keep it up

nice comic make more i like the pokemon sprite

WHAT HAPPEND TO COMIC 13!?!?!?!?
Otherwise it was a good cimic

Soz bout that, comic 15 was supposed to be comic 13.

I Didn't Give You Permission To Use My Ultimate Latios Sprite... So Don't Use It In This Comic, Or I Must Report You...

You killed it omega i hate you.......(No joke) Enemy N00B

Lots of confusing and useless dialog, unused panels many confusing scenes, stolen sprites, and the main characters an 00ber.

Nice thought, but it wasn't carried out very well. Your characters also aren't very realistic. You need to think about their reactions to things. Don't use TuP, and work on your grammar. A lot.

The entire HQ scene was way too confusing, you need tails or specific colorations. Three shades of red is almost as confusing as reusing the same shade three times.

hehe, this thread is older than 30 days - it should never have been posted in.

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