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this idea I had fore a pg14 story about my friends

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Fortune Hunter2

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    • *door opens*
    Zach:How on earth did she manage to blow it up?!??
    Matthw:runs to closet and flings open trapdore and screams{ in a high pitched girly voice} It's gone It's all gone!!
    Zach: well we did buy the store out of all it's beer and wine with fake lisences.
    Stephen:{slurping on his girlfriend nicknamed Meatloaf} mumth fuwwph gurgle.
    Seth: {translating} he said that he and meatloaf loved to fill their bathtub with it and g-{ gets hit over the head with a lead pipe} were going to play put put golf naked> falls in a heap in the floor.
    Me:hey Anja why don't you come bunk with me tonight?
    Anja:{sighs} OK
    Stephen:{starts taking off his pants}
    every one else: {Running running running}
    Stephen:{screaming} More MOre MOre
    Every one else: {sprintint sptinting sprinting}




    Well what do you think of it so far??
     

    Lily

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    • Okay..first of all, stories like these either belong in Pokemon fanfiction or Other Writing. Since yours has nothing to do with Pokemon, this belongs in Other Writing. *moves*

    Secondly, if it's an idea, then it's better to post it in the Other Writing Lounge to accumulate more opinions. Make sure to post the finished work, not a work in need of revision. ^^;

    At any rate, I'd advise you to edit your work before posting...it's evident you put little to no effort, and the format for the script isn't even standard. ._.;
     
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