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My own stuff again

John Denver

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  • this is my own stuff, this is pretty difficult poem to understand...but it's about fanatics...

    Lover's Fame

    On my porch I sat there waiting
    Waiting for my Lover's Fame
    Hating so the sinful waning
    Staining all that we call sane

    Paining me, my heart is shaking
    Resembling an earthly quaking
    Staking out, on porch I'm waiting
    Waiting for my Lover's Fame

    Fame is such a wordly shaming
    Shaming all that call it gaining
    Gaining till their minds aren't feinting
    Feinting over my Lover's Fame


    feeed baaaaack!

    BOO ya!
     

    ^^NICK^^ v.3.0

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  • Cool Poem with hard words! GOODY. Well, my interpretation of the poem (or pome, as people say @_@) is that fame is not all as great as people think it is, and in a way it ruins your life, like you can never see your "lover" because their famous, and doing movies and stuff. Am I right?

    ~Dazed and CONFUSED Luis
     

    Blaine

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  • Ah, Dakota. Always wonderful work from you. Very very similar to the styles of the old classic rock band Led Zeppelin. This poem is quite interesting and well written. I like it. No angst, which is always a nice thing. The same ole same ole gets very old every once in a while. For once, the big bad Blaine has nothing to criticize. Wonderful job, Dakota. Wonderful job.
     

    John Denver

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  • Woopsy Blaine...I got some angst comin! ah! It's about how people overeact to every little thing that may potentially damage someone. Even if the thing is realy insignificant...

    This Setting

    A place as cold and damp as this
    With lace on every orafice
    Can't face the lies with shaking fists
    That's it's a child's nightmare

    The slides and swings
    Are present here
    Those minute things
    Cannot adhere
    The damage done
    To such a mind
    As children loosely shown

    So why I ask
    Do these things stay?
    With warnings passed
    To all's dismay
    Are going to hurt
    And damage all we know
    And love


    yay...another one BOO ya!
     

    John Denver

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  • His Hobby

    A sweet bird sings to all who hear
    And choose to think of yester-year
    Of months ago
    And weeks gone past
    Will burst asunder far too fast

    The whitest dove will always perch
    To those who think of family first
    To those who think
    Conceidely
    In them a thousand vultures feed

    A blue jay's feathers shown with flare
    Are things all birds would love to wear
    The ones who say
    "That bird is fake"
    To him? Ignore!...for heavens sake

    A Raven's dark and shadowed hood
    Is certainly mis-understood
    He doesn't not mean
    To send you back
    He just thinks he looks good in black

    Some birds are good and some are bad
    And some give lessons to be had
    To find the bird
    That's surely thine
    You have to open up your mind


    BOO ya!
     
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