Glaceon's Blizzard

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once of there,a glaceon appeared in snowpoint city,then a blizzard cames and these blizzards are soo strong,a graveler earthquakes the floor,ash,brock,misty,gary and dawn's pokemons are eating their food,Brock's Croagunk was playing in the food,and ash is seeing the glaceon no one with it,ash gets the glaceon and the glaceon is drowzing,then they give glaceon food,red the pokemon red trainers appeared and sees the glaceon,Red said:What is that Pokemon,He see its pokedex and knowed it
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Part 2 is coming

What is this? Honestly it doesn't make sense, so what is this?

Excuse me, but I think you posted this in the wrong area. =/

This is for talking about Pokemon Manga, not to post fan-fiction stories. Plus even if you could post topics like this, that story isn't very clear. BTW, I'm guessing this is a fan-fic story.

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...........wat?........ This is definitely a fanfic, or an ATTEMPT anyways.

And I thought I was a bad writer.

MewTwo said:

knowed it

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'Knowed' isn't a word. You should correct that!

Other than that it's REALLY GOOD. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!1!!!

Just... I don't even know what to say to this :| First of all, there's a section for Pokémon Fanfiction, but I seriously doubt this is up to the standards there. Try revising it or something, I dunno.

Reading the rules might help too, just a thought.

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