Light Yagami
Compulsive Battler#1
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- Seen Jul 10, 2016
Chapter 1
"Can you smell the fresh air Glaceon?" Aaron asked his #1 partner. He just had put on a fresh t-shirt, blue jeans, and his favorite blue running shoes his mother had given him at the start of his journey. His Glaceon was obviously well kept, bright blue, almost like it was shiny....
Glaceon nodded with agreement.
Aaron had just stepped off the cruise ship with his pal Glaceon, and it was a beautiful day. "I guess you'll want to get back in your ball huh? Return! I wonder if I'll have a good challenge here like I did in Sinnoh" Aaron thought to himself aloud.
"You won't find any better than right here! I challenge you!" Yelled out this girl in the crowd. You could tell by her clothes she was very stylish. She had long blonde hair, a Torchic t-shirt, jeans with a stylish rip, and brand new fire-red running shoes. You could also tell by her voice that she was very high-strung.
Aaron turned around "Hmmmm? No need to yell, I'm not that far away. And as for the battle, that would be a no, I just got into town and I want to relax for a bit." He didn't want to show his prize pokemon to someone who obviously just got their pokemon a week ago.
"Hmph, you must think you're that good huh? Well I have news for you buddy, I'm not the average pushover. Don't let my looks fool you. You must think I got my registration out a cereal box huh? Sabrina asked with a sting.
Aaron looked up with surprise, this girl was out of the norm. She was unique in alot of ways, and articulate too. "Well if you insist, we can battle tomorrow. Where may I find the Pokemon Center?" His statements and his questions contained much more respect than before.
"Follow me, I'll show you the way!" Sabrina yelled, obviously not offended anymore.
His name is Aaron, he was the Sinnoh league champ and he refuses to lose.
A short Chapter 1 I know. Thats why I am posting Chapter 1 and 2 simultaneously.
Chapter 2
It was a fresh day in Lilycove city. The Pidgey were chirping and and it was sunny. The perfect day to train Aaron was thinking. He hopped out of bed and threw on a fresh shirt and jeans from his suitcase, grabbed his pokeballs and headed out of the Pokemon Center.
"Can we finally have this battle?!?" Sabrina asked with a screech.
"Hold your Horsea, let me get some fresh air and we'll battle" Exclaimed Aaron. He was only a step out the door, he figured she had been waiting out there only morning.
"Oh no, you have been putting this off long enough, GO Torkoal!" Sabrina yelled as she threw her pokeball.
"If thats what you really want, I suppose you'll be a good warmup. It will be a two on two, agreed?" He yawned as he lazily sent out his Gastrodon. No problem, his journey could wait ten minutes.
"Agreed" Sabrina always was quick to start a battle, however she didn't know what type or kind of pokemon this was. Since Aaron knew he had the type advanage he started with a strong Water Pulse, and Sabrina was so dumbfounded, she couldn't command her Torkoal to move fast enough. Aaron knew what the outcome of this match would be, he knew his pokemon wouldn't be easily identified Hoenn and with that advantage he could take these trainers on no problem. The only thing he didn't know is that there were interested trainers who were watching and had already knew that his first pokemon, Gastrodon was a water type, or so they thought.
"Okay you beat just one of my pokemon, you think I'm some newbie who can't think up a strategy? I'll get you now, go Manetric! I'll devastate your Gastro-whatever it is" yelled Sabrina.
"Oh so now that you can't beat me, you'll insult my pokemon and I, oh you will pay" hissed Aaron with contempt. Plus he had come to a conclusion that this girl was just too loud.
"Whatever lets go!" She yelled. Now thinking she knew what to do she had her Manetric do a a thunder that seemed to come from the heavens, and when it struck Gastrodon, it didn't even bat an eye.
"No, this isn't possible, whats your deal? Why didn't that Thunder destroy that thing?" Sabrina said in awe.
"I won't stand for your insults on my pokemon! You wanna know my 'deal', okay you'll see right now!" Aaron said this with a roar because people never respected what they couldn't understand. When Aaron had first found Gastrodon, it was a Shellos no one wanted or cared about. With his love and affection Shellos grew stronger, learned ground attacks he never dreamed of, and finally evolved. Aaron knew that his move would give up his Gastrodon's mystery to the whole crowd he had noticed behind him, but he had no choice, Sabrina had to pay for her insults.
"Okay Gastrodon do a Earthquake that'll give a ten on the richter scale!" ordered Aaron. With no remorse at the damage Gastrodon knew it would deal out it shot out an Earthquake that Manetric just couldn't avoid.
"Okay this pokemon won't lose....it can't lose" Sabrina reassured herself. "Go Skiploom!" As soon as it was sent out, Skiploom rose to the sky. Sabrina finally knew the perfect strategy to beat Gastrodon, she had Skiploom use Leech Seed on Gastrodon and it hit dead on. Gastrodon couldn't hit it with Water Pulse, Hidden Power, or Body Slam and Earthquake. It was a waiting game for Sabrina as the Leech Seed took effect and destroyed Gastrodon.
"Return Gastrodon. You did your best and did a great job." Aaron whispered to the pokeball. "Now its your time to shine!" yelled Aaron as he sent out Glaceon.
Sabrina had seen Glaceon yesterday, and thats who she thought he would start with today, and thats why she started with Torkoal, but now Torkoal was out for the count. "Skiploom Leech Seed once more!" Sabrina commanded. Sabrina figured it worked once, why not again?
"This is where your precision training comes in handy Glaceon, Icebeam!" ordered Aaron. With the beam of ice that Glaceon omitted, the Leech Seed froze up and and also knocked Skiploom right out the clear-blue sky.
"Okay, I'll admit your good, but when my teacher comes you'll be put to shame." sniffed Sabrina.
"Your teacher?" asked Aaron with confusion.
"That would be me." Said a shadowy figure that came from the crowd.
" How do I get myself mixed up in these kind of things?" asked Aaron with disgust.
His name is the Teacher, but no one knows who he is besides Sabrina.
I welcome any criticsm or comments
"Can you smell the fresh air Glaceon?" Aaron asked his #1 partner. He just had put on a fresh t-shirt, blue jeans, and his favorite blue running shoes his mother had given him at the start of his journey. His Glaceon was obviously well kept, bright blue, almost like it was shiny....
Glaceon nodded with agreement.
Aaron had just stepped off the cruise ship with his pal Glaceon, and it was a beautiful day. "I guess you'll want to get back in your ball huh? Return! I wonder if I'll have a good challenge here like I did in Sinnoh" Aaron thought to himself aloud.
"You won't find any better than right here! I challenge you!" Yelled out this girl in the crowd. You could tell by her clothes she was very stylish. She had long blonde hair, a Torchic t-shirt, jeans with a stylish rip, and brand new fire-red running shoes. You could also tell by her voice that she was very high-strung.
Aaron turned around "Hmmmm? No need to yell, I'm not that far away. And as for the battle, that would be a no, I just got into town and I want to relax for a bit." He didn't want to show his prize pokemon to someone who obviously just got their pokemon a week ago.
"Hmph, you must think you're that good huh? Well I have news for you buddy, I'm not the average pushover. Don't let my looks fool you. You must think I got my registration out a cereal box huh? Sabrina asked with a sting.
Aaron looked up with surprise, this girl was out of the norm. She was unique in alot of ways, and articulate too. "Well if you insist, we can battle tomorrow. Where may I find the Pokemon Center?" His statements and his questions contained much more respect than before.
"Follow me, I'll show you the way!" Sabrina yelled, obviously not offended anymore.
His name is Aaron, he was the Sinnoh league champ and he refuses to lose.
A short Chapter 1 I know. Thats why I am posting Chapter 1 and 2 simultaneously.
Chapter 2
It was a fresh day in Lilycove city. The Pidgey were chirping and and it was sunny. The perfect day to train Aaron was thinking. He hopped out of bed and threw on a fresh shirt and jeans from his suitcase, grabbed his pokeballs and headed out of the Pokemon Center.
"Can we finally have this battle?!?" Sabrina asked with a screech.
"Hold your Horsea, let me get some fresh air and we'll battle" Exclaimed Aaron. He was only a step out the door, he figured she had been waiting out there only morning.
"Oh no, you have been putting this off long enough, GO Torkoal!" Sabrina yelled as she threw her pokeball.
"If thats what you really want, I suppose you'll be a good warmup. It will be a two on two, agreed?" He yawned as he lazily sent out his Gastrodon. No problem, his journey could wait ten minutes.
"Agreed" Sabrina always was quick to start a battle, however she didn't know what type or kind of pokemon this was. Since Aaron knew he had the type advanage he started with a strong Water Pulse, and Sabrina was so dumbfounded, she couldn't command her Torkoal to move fast enough. Aaron knew what the outcome of this match would be, he knew his pokemon wouldn't be easily identified Hoenn and with that advantage he could take these trainers on no problem. The only thing he didn't know is that there were interested trainers who were watching and had already knew that his first pokemon, Gastrodon was a water type, or so they thought.
"Okay you beat just one of my pokemon, you think I'm some newbie who can't think up a strategy? I'll get you now, go Manetric! I'll devastate your Gastro-whatever it is" yelled Sabrina.
"Oh so now that you can't beat me, you'll insult my pokemon and I, oh you will pay" hissed Aaron with contempt. Plus he had come to a conclusion that this girl was just too loud.
"Whatever lets go!" She yelled. Now thinking she knew what to do she had her Manetric do a a thunder that seemed to come from the heavens, and when it struck Gastrodon, it didn't even bat an eye.
"No, this isn't possible, whats your deal? Why didn't that Thunder destroy that thing?" Sabrina said in awe.
"I won't stand for your insults on my pokemon! You wanna know my 'deal', okay you'll see right now!" Aaron said this with a roar because people never respected what they couldn't understand. When Aaron had first found Gastrodon, it was a Shellos no one wanted or cared about. With his love and affection Shellos grew stronger, learned ground attacks he never dreamed of, and finally evolved. Aaron knew that his move would give up his Gastrodon's mystery to the whole crowd he had noticed behind him, but he had no choice, Sabrina had to pay for her insults.
"Okay Gastrodon do a Earthquake that'll give a ten on the richter scale!" ordered Aaron. With no remorse at the damage Gastrodon knew it would deal out it shot out an Earthquake that Manetric just couldn't avoid.
"Okay this pokemon won't lose....it can't lose" Sabrina reassured herself. "Go Skiploom!" As soon as it was sent out, Skiploom rose to the sky. Sabrina finally knew the perfect strategy to beat Gastrodon, she had Skiploom use Leech Seed on Gastrodon and it hit dead on. Gastrodon couldn't hit it with Water Pulse, Hidden Power, or Body Slam and Earthquake. It was a waiting game for Sabrina as the Leech Seed took effect and destroyed Gastrodon.
"Return Gastrodon. You did your best and did a great job." Aaron whispered to the pokeball. "Now its your time to shine!" yelled Aaron as he sent out Glaceon.
Sabrina had seen Glaceon yesterday, and thats who she thought he would start with today, and thats why she started with Torkoal, but now Torkoal was out for the count. "Skiploom Leech Seed once more!" Sabrina commanded. Sabrina figured it worked once, why not again?
"This is where your precision training comes in handy Glaceon, Icebeam!" ordered Aaron. With the beam of ice that Glaceon omitted, the Leech Seed froze up and and also knocked Skiploom right out the clear-blue sky.
"Okay, I'll admit your good, but when my teacher comes you'll be put to shame." sniffed Sabrina.
"Your teacher?" asked Aaron with confusion.
"That would be me." Said a shadowy figure that came from the crowd.
" How do I get myself mixed up in these kind of things?" asked Aaron with disgust.
His name is the Teacher, but no one knows who he is besides Sabrina.
I welcome any criticsm or comments
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