Las VERDURAS! [Webcomic]

Ok, I guess I'll finally post this stupid junk XD It's about Cherry o.o; And his friend Grape o.o; And a virus named n00b o.o;

Yeah~ weird XD Anyways, there's some subtle jokes in it. I hope you're smart enough to get them 8D

#001: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v338/pokejungle/las_verduras_1.png

Not really funny, my first attempt.

#002: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v338/pokejungle/las_verduras_2.png

People actually seemed to like this one o.o;

So, I'd like lots of critism, and comments. I need to improve this <<; #003 is coming out today XD Tell me what to do better before I scew up the third one too! ;D

"Well if you ask me, you both could be either sex. Opps. I acted nomal for a second. I R NOOB!! PH33R!

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lol


grape looks so cute with those humongus eyes :P

Yeah, Grape's the crowd favorite XD

Thanks for commenting~ I thought I had killed my own thread XD

Cool. I like N00B. He's cool. I can't wait to see more.

second made my snicker slightly but good art and stuff like that

Now I'm going to make a third comic ... today.

I'm trying to make "Olive" but she's not coming out well XD

if you need any help paul with sprites for the comic or what not. IM me on msn okay.

Esupio sono Kamereon said:

if you need any help paul with sprites for the comic or what not. IM me on msn okay.

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I would, but there's no MSN email there for me to IM :3

LOL. The second one is random =P
erm..... criticism? You don't want to hear any of that from me, I SUCK at comics XD *dies*
wahahrhrhrhrhharhahr

Katsuro said:

I would, but there's no MSN email there for me to IM :3

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dude. I'm already on your contacts. if you've forgotten its [email protected].

wheres No. 3? *spazz*

<.<;

I'm working on #3 everyone! Hopefully it'll be up tonight/tomorrow.