Logical Cabbage
A Very Big Altaria Fan
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Hey guys! How's it going? Logical Cabbage reporting for writing duty. I just love the spin off games, especially Mystery Dungeon Series. I see most pokemon stories are about the humans, so I decided to write about the pokemon. I got the idea, but how exactly should I based this off? I used the mystery dungeon games as the base but then dropped it. I am a fan of medieval times, so why not make this about war? I know, not exactly original but suits for me. Of course on from their, I need a base character.
Hardest part for me was this. I need a character who I can rely on POV but at the same time not perfect. Who's the pokemon for the job? I cut it down to fire types and even more by fire type starters. But still, there was the decision at hand. Who to pick? Of course the perspective character has to suffer, so I cut out Torchic to spare it. I felt like Chimchar was too sneaky looking, and I'm going for a somewhat naive personality, so off with it. Tepig, can't actually imagine it meeting my standards, so off with that. There's Fennikin, but like Torchic, too cute to suffer. There's only Cyndaquil and Charmandar left, but I went with Cyndaquil. Trust me when I say I don't want anyone to suffer, but this is a war. People, pokemon in this case, die in wars anyway. Plus I want Fire Blast to be used, and Charmandar is an attacker, so bye bye.
But I don't want to make this all a one point of view. Too boring if you ask me. Plus, Cyndaquil can't be everywhere, so I'll open a new perspective. I had to make it third person and do the interjection every once in a while. Of course to make things more interesting, I'll do the third person spotlighting the Alos Believers, or the bad guys. Now who to be the bad guy? I shall no reveal the evil boss here, so don't ask. Anyway, he (a she is too evil for the cast, so a guy shall do) obviously has to be a dragon cause they are the strongest types and we need something threatening here. I can always make Dragonite with an eye patch, but no. Not Garchomp, like that dragon too much. As I was thinking about this while playing Pokemon Conquest, I told Haxorus to kill with Outrage. Wait, Haxorus is a dragon so I'll stick with him. He needs some sort of lackey and I chose Crobat; they were battling together, so that's that.
For their characters, that's going to take a while. Throughout the story, I'll reveal more layers of these three characters that I came up with. That's it for now people; I'll post new "behind the scenes" spoilers soon. Enjoy the bloodshed,... I meant story. But nevertheless, I hope I don't disappoint you.
Hey guys! How's it going? Logical Cabbage reporting for writing duty. I just love the spin off games, especially Mystery Dungeon Series. I see most pokemon stories are about the humans, so I decided to write about the pokemon. I got the idea, but how exactly should I based this off? I used the mystery dungeon games as the base but then dropped it. I am a fan of medieval times, so why not make this about war? I know, not exactly original but suits for me. Of course on from their, I need a base character.
Hardest part for me was this. I need a character who I can rely on POV but at the same time not perfect. Who's the pokemon for the job? I cut it down to fire types and even more by fire type starters. But still, there was the decision at hand. Who to pick? Of course the perspective character has to suffer, so I cut out Torchic to spare it. I felt like Chimchar was too sneaky looking, and I'm going for a somewhat naive personality, so off with it. Tepig, can't actually imagine it meeting my standards, so off with that. There's Fennikin, but like Torchic, too cute to suffer. There's only Cyndaquil and Charmandar left, but I went with Cyndaquil. Trust me when I say I don't want anyone to suffer, but this is a war. People, pokemon in this case, die in wars anyway. Plus I want Fire Blast to be used, and Charmandar is an attacker, so bye bye.
But I don't want to make this all a one point of view. Too boring if you ask me. Plus, Cyndaquil can't be everywhere, so I'll open a new perspective. I had to make it third person and do the interjection every once in a while. Of course to make things more interesting, I'll do the third person spotlighting the Alos Believers, or the bad guys. Now who to be the bad guy? I shall no reveal the evil boss here, so don't ask. Anyway, he (a she is too evil for the cast, so a guy shall do) obviously has to be a dragon cause they are the strongest types and we need something threatening here. I can always make Dragonite with an eye patch, but no. Not Garchomp, like that dragon too much. As I was thinking about this while playing Pokemon Conquest, I told Haxorus to kill with Outrage. Wait, Haxorus is a dragon so I'll stick with him. He needs some sort of lackey and I chose Crobat; they were battling together, so that's that.
For their characters, that's going to take a while. Throughout the story, I'll reveal more layers of these three characters that I came up with. That's it for now people; I'll post new "behind the scenes" spoilers soon. Enjoy the bloodshed,... I meant story. But nevertheless, I hope I don't disappoint you.
The loyal pokemon of Hollow Kingdom are still grieving on the news earlier not just two days ago. A mysterious figure stood out above on a cape watching all of the angry mob of pokemon holding up their banners against the Council. Their roars were quite frightening and she sighs in relief, grateful for the privacy to think.
Even though she was just a school tutor, she knew that these events are adding up. The sudden vanish of their beloved king, the summoning of young pokemon to the battlefield, the fall of Deoxys, the awakening of Kyurem and so many other things...
" I warned that foolish king to know who serves him. Now he's missing out of nowhere and we'd be easily be taken over by the Alos Believers. Oh why did this prophecy had to be..."
" Ms. G?"
The Gardevoir startled turns around to the voice but smiles when she sees who it is.
" Oh, it's just you Dratini. What brings you here today? I thought I said class was canceled this whole week."
" I know but don't you feel something coming worst than what has happened?"
The Gardevoir looks questionably at Dratini but then remembers how he is linked to all of this, even though she never told him so. Hesitantly, she continues the conversation.
" You're right, things are changing. But first let me give you this."
She looks around first and then walks up to a tree so old you wouldn't pay much attention to it. She pulls out a broken but sturdy maroon box. She looks at him, knowing that this will change his life forever. She opens it and pulls out a clear necklace and puts it around his neck. He stares at her and then realizes everything.
" So it's true," he says. " The Guardians are the cause of all of this. But why give this to me?"
" Because you too are a Guardian, Dratini."
He gazes at the necklace and thinks that this was fate. But the cautious side of him knew that pokemon will no longer consider him a child no more. If only his dad could see him now, except that he did a long time ago.
"But Ms. G, why me? Why me? How did you even..."
The Dratini never got to finish what he was saying because all of a sudden, a massive earthquake struck the kingdom. The Gardevoir knew what was coming and slowly begins to meditate.
Down below we can see pokemon in black and red uniforms emerge from the ground. A pokemon with a savage look in his eyes marches in front and draws out his sword. He stops and the whole army halts. The pokemon of the kingdom stops the protesting, waiting for them to kill. The local militia arrives but realizes their mistake as soon as they see the size. The Haxorus smirks at them, and lifts up his sword.
"Attack!!!"
He smiles as he charges towards their general and tackles him to the ground. He yells in victory and lunges the sword down to his heart. More pokemon come towards them but he lets them be. Who knows, maybe they can get some of these soldiers and convert them to warriors. The boss should be pleased since he encourages the captures of the valuable. It reminds him of his other attack earlier in the week, in that fire village. He hated how that stupid Guardian got away, but at least he manage to recruit a very powerful Quilava and get the ruby orb.
Still though, back to business. His mom would have said that it was wrong to be gleeful at massacres, but she was no longer a worry. After all, she was his first kill. Anyway, where could that Guardian be? Those annoying kids down the street in a pool of rich blood don't fit to be him. Oh well, at least he can have fun taking down these stupid pokemon.
A purple shape flew right to his way. He pulled out his sword to kill it but then recognized him. He was beginning to wonder what his right hand lackey wanted when he pointed towards a hill. Nothing too important about it and Haxorus badly wanted to smack his mute friend when he saw them. Forget about that Gardevoir, that Dratini was the pokemon he sought out. The Crystal, the great one said, was a pretty powerful yet timid for he was young.
" Head to the cape! Show no mercy, but bring me that Dratini alive!"
As his army marched towards the two, he smiled. Once he got the Dratini, all he needed to do was to drop the weapon and this land was theirs. Easier said than done, he thought. But his thoughts were rudely interrupted by a blinding light on the hill. Usually nothing made him close his eyes but that light burned his sight. A few seconds later, he sees the fairy lying useless on the hill. His men marched and took her away. As for the Dratini, he was nowhere to be seen.
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