They're not correct. I don't know exactly what it was trying to say, but I was trying to guess based on what was actually said. You can't try and tell me that many of those sentences are correct, however. I have a BA in English, I think I know a correct sentence from an incorrect one when I see one.
I didn't post images because I didn't really see the point. All that I needed to do was post what was said, which was a lot less time consuming.
I'm sorry if anything I said caused offense, I was just trying to help. You asked me to point out places where I saw grammatical errors, and I went through the first section of the game again and pointed out the ones that I saw.