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Pokemon New Orre

Firemaker

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    • This game is placed in Orre, it is only 2D

    Story, you live in the orre region, 50 years ago, Leo(Colleseum hero) stopped Team Snagem and Cipher from their shadow pokemon. Now Ein JR has created Dark Shadow or ultra shadow pokemon. You must catch shadow pokemon and Dark Shadow. Ultra Shadow are harder to purify and know more moves. To beat the game you must catch and purify the ultimate pokemon

    Screens!
     

    Tsukasa

    KWR
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    • ok i think u should make it so that in your first screen the nincada dont have white backgrounds and in your third screen u might wanna make the sprite a little mor spritish ^^;; give it a outline
     

    Jeff_PKLight

    RMXP User
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    • It looks alright, but here are my thoughts:

    1: White background on the pokemon doesn't look good.
    2: A bit empty...
    3: (like Light mentioned)
    4: Nothing wrong (except a few spelling errors)
    5: A bit empty...

    ^^I'm not trying to criticize, but it's just my thoughts. :)
     

    Dawson

    The Rebirth Is Upon Us
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    • Yay a new Pokemon Orre game. I hope it'll end up as good as the last one ;) I agree with Jeff's pointers, the screens need a bit of brushing up.
     

    PKMN_Sage

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    • Seen Apr 9, 2011
    Jeff_PKLight said:
    It looks alright, but here are my thoughts:

    1: White background on the pokemon doesn't look good.
    2: A bit empty...
    3: (like Light mentioned)
    4: Nothing wrong (except a few spelling errors)
    5: A bit empty...

    ^^I'm not trying to criticize, but it's just my thoughts. :)
    Click to expand...

    Constructive criticism, it's a good thing. Otherwise, people would just always just be nice and never allow the other person to grow. Thanks for the comment phoenix. :)

    I wonder if Maximo will be happy with this Orre game.
     

    Sorye HK

    Looking around here and there
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    • Seen Dec 1, 2021
    I guess I'll have to agree with Jeff. The blank maps really need to be fixed.
     

    Maximo v.2

    my walking sprites and....
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    • Id be more happy if you were making it pokmn sage but this should be intresting try not to leave big spaces of grass either
     

    Peekimon

    Me = cat-aholic, Meowr
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    • Another thing:
    Don't save the screens as JPG because it kind of blurs the image. Save it as GIF or PNG

    The last map is VERY, I mean it, VERY empty, so, you should fill up the space with grass, trees or something.
    White background around the pok?mon, ruins the battle, (graphically)

    Just, consider the critiscism as ways of improving, btw, good luck with this project.
     
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