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[Pokémon] The Finnx Archipelago - Ash's New Quest

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    Hello. everyone! My name is Targetedandfiring. Today I am here with a brand new story. For those who have read PrincessStella's discontinued The Eclipse Islands on Fanfiction, I have been given permission to do my own take of that story, as she no longer has interest in continuing it. To those who haven't read it, well read on from here. Anyways, the timeline for this game takes place roughly 2 months after the Kalos league. Some Pokemon that Ash may not currently have in the Anime but that I'm hoping he might get due to some trailers of future episodes that have been showcased along with what Pokemon he currently holds.

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    Chapter 1: Realizing a Dream Anew

    It's been two months since Ash had arrived in Pallet Town. Two months since his journey in Kalos had ended. Even now, as the sun rose up to signal the start of a new day, Ash stood staring at the ceiling. He'd failed and now he had nowhere else to go. Currently, Ash lay on his bed, with his starter and best friend Pikachu, occupying the foot of the bed. They both looked rather bored.

    To Ash, going on another journey seemed pointless and bland. What good would it do it him anyway? He'd already ventured to all the regions and journeying to the Battle Frontier in Johto and Sinnoh would be boring considering all the facilities were in one place. Besides, it wouldn't be the same. Ash missed his friends. He missed Misty, her tomboyish attitude and the ability to always get into fights with Ash. He missed Brock, who had been with Ash since the start of his journey, only to drop out at the end of his adventures in Sinnoh and go into training to become a Doctor. Ash missed Max, who had always had the knack for giving Ash advice with typings and had been a great a help as Brock had when venturing through Hoen. Ash missed May, whose love for contests and ability to quickly learn to make amazing meals from Brock had always been one of Ash's more favorable traits.

    As Ash thought about all his friends, his thoughts drifted to his latest adventures in Sinnoh, Unova ,Kalos, he couldn't feel the same connection he had with his friends from earlier travels.
    Dawn, in Ash's opinion, had become a nuisance near the end of his adventures. Besides, she was in the middle of a contest circuit at the moment and wouldn't have time. Cilan's constant connoisseur evaluations had always been annoying. Iris, who had recently taken over the Opelucid City gym, was always calling him a kid when she acted like one herself most of the time. Then there was Bonnie, the girl who was always trying to get Clemont a girlfriend. Clemont himself had always angered Ash, who had received more than a couple burns from his machines always failing. Finally, there was Serena. Just the mere thought of Serena was enough to make Ash angry.

    Ash didn't stay angry for long as he heard his mother, Delia, stomping up the stairs. He let out a sigh as he curled up tighter into his bed sheets.

    "Ash Ketchum you get out of that bed this instant and go out on an adventure right now!" Delia Ketchum yelled as she threw open Ash's door. Ash let out a groan of protest. It was still far too early for his liking to get up.

    "Mom I've already told you, there isn't anywhere else to challenge!" Ash complained. "I've already gone to every region and done every league!"

    "Then why can't you go back and do them again. Maybe you could place higher at the leagues or even beat them?" Delia questioned Ash. Ash let out a loud sigh in response.

    "Mom it wouldn't feel right. Besides I don't have my friends to go with me," Ash countered.

    "Well. have you asked any of them? I'm sure Dawn, Clemont, Bonnie, Iris, and Cilan would love to go," Delia suggested, making sure to not mention Serena's name.

    "Mom; Clemont, Iris, and Cilan are all gym leaders again. Bonnie is too young to journey with me without Clemont. Dawn's in the middle of a contest circuit. Besides, as I've stated before there are no more challenges for me to part take in," Ash told Delia with a sigh.

    "Well. how about the Battle Frontiers in Johto and Sinnoh. I've heard they have wonderful Battle Frontiers there," Delia once again suggested to her moping son.

    "No mom it just doesn't seem right," Ash explained with a sigh.

    "Ash. have you even talked to Professor Oak about this? He's always been a great source of knowledge to you when it comes down to choosing your next challenge," Delia told Ash.

    "But mom I know that there aren't any left! There aren't any more regions for me to journey to!" Ash groaned in frustration.

    "Ash Ketchum get out of bed and go ask Professor Oak right now! Go on, get!" Delia yelled, finally too frustrated with her son to go on letting him mope more than he was already. She grabbed Ash, who frantically struggled to get away before dragging him off his bed.

    "Ash if you don't hurry and get changed, I'm dragging you to Professor Oak's lab, pajamas and all," Delia warned. Knowing his mother's threats were true, Ash got up and quickly got changed into his latest clothes from Kalos before rushing out the door with Pikachu on his shoulder.

    All it took was a quick run down the road to Professor Oak's house. As Ash ran between the large fields between his home and the professor's, he took notice of some of his Pokemon roaming Professor Oak's fields. His Tauros were eagerly on the run, while Sceptile and Servine were sparring with Greninja and Dewott, helping both of the water types train up. Snorlax, apparently having had a big meal, now lay lazily on his back as Goodra snored happily against the large Pokemon's side.

    The Professor's Lab quickly came into view. Thankfully for Ash, Professor Oak was outside with a very familiar face standing next to him.

    "Ash my boy! Good to see you! I was wondering when you were going to decide visiting. Many of your Pokemon have been very worried. You haven't visited in over a week," Professor Oak said, a worried expression on his face. However, Ash didn't respond to Professor Oak immediately, more interested in who he had by his side.

    "Gary! Long time no see!" Ash said as he walked up to his old rival, a grin on his face.

    "Ash! I was beginning to wonder if you'd ever leave your room," Gary told his old rival with a playful grin,"I've been here at least a week." Ash. however, merely looked down. The guilt of secluding himself for so long was finally coming to him. Shaking it off for a second, he turned to Professor Oak.

    "Good morning Professor. The reason I came over today was to ask if there was a challenge for me to take on? Another league? Or maybe another region?" Ash questioned the Professor.

    "I'm sorry to say Ash, but you've already competed in all 6 regions, the Orange Islands, and the Battle Frontier. The only new challenges would be the Frontiers in Johto and Sinnoh," the Professor explained.

    "So then the only challenges I would have would be re-doing leagues again?" Ash asked, feeling defeated.

    "Ash I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be too bad. Each league has an average of around 60 gyms in it. Sinnoh itself has 67. Usually, you've just jumped from nearest gym to nearest gym. That or you've done the most popular gyms. You could go back through the region without having to face the same gym leaders. It'd be a brand new experience," Gary told Ash after seeing his defeated look.

    "You could become a Frontier Brain if you'd like Ash. You were offered the position once, remember?" Professor Oak reminded Ash, who merely shook his head at the suggestion.

    "Maybe one day, but not yet," Ash told the Professor.

    "Well. you could - actually nevermind," Gary finished nervously,"I'm out of ideas."

    "What do you mean by that Gary," Ash said looking at Gary suspiciously.

    "Gary you might as well tell him. He'll find out if we don't," Professor Oak advised.

    "Tell me what!?" Ash asked, starting to get excited.

    "Ash have you ever heard of the Finnx Archipelago?" Gary asked nervously. Ash merely gave Gary a confused look to which Gary sighed.

    "The Finnx Archipelago is a chain of 18 Islands," Gary began to explain.

    "Well, where are they at?" Ash asked, practically ready to zoom back to his house to start packing.

    "The Finnx Archipelago is, well, in the middle of nowhere. About 300 miles south of Hoen. The Finnx Archipelago...houses the strongest league in the world," Gary explained.

    "The strongest league in the world?" Ash asked, the tone of amazement clearly heard in his voice.

    "Yep. It's run by a group of trainers, 12 girls and 6 boys, each stronger than most gym leaders and each specializing in their own type. However, it's set up a bit differently than other leagues since they don't have their own Champion and Elite Four due to it being so small and the trainers there so tough. They make up for that with a top 5 though. To make up with their difficulty, the league also has something pretty special. If you win all the 18 badges, then you can automatically qualify to take on any Elite Four and Champion of any leagues in the world," Gary finished.

    "No way, are they really that good?" Ash asked surprised. Ash was pretty sure he knew how it worked to get to challenge the Elite Four of a region. First, the challenger had to collect 8 badges and then partake in the regional tournament and place 1st, something Ash had never had the honor of achieving.

    "More than that good. Before the League was established, some of them were members of the Elite Four and I think one or two were even Champion. I heard a rumor about not getting a challenge from the one yearly challenger they had so they set up the league," Gary responded, but noticed that Ash was already in a thinking mood. All the despair of not getting a challenge was finally leaving Ash and a child-like grin was quickly growing on the teen's face.

    "Alright, Pikachu! Looks like we'll be hitting the Finnx Archipelago next!" Ash told the small electric type, who had been conversing with Bayleef. The grass type had run up when Ash had first arrived.

    "Let's head home so we can pack!" Ash told Pikachu.

    "Wait Ash! You'll have to be careful. To challenge the Finnx League you'll need your strongest Pokemon," Professor Oak advised.

    "What Gramps is trying to say. Ash, is that you can't go around catching and training Pokemon as you've done in the past. Anything less than your best is what it's going to take for you to beat the Finnx League. Also, you can't keep using the same ones over and over again. You'll fall into a pattern and they'll catch you out," Gary warned Ash.

    "What do you mean by that?" Ash asked Gary, a tad bit confused.

    "The gym leaders are all really close. If they think you might beat them, they'll take close attention to your battling style and the type of Pokemon you use. They'll focus in on you, and then they'll warn the next trainer you're going at to prepare them. They'll use what they know to defeat you," Gary advised.

    Ash frowned. He'd never had that kind of problem with gym leaders in the past. Usually, gym leaders he'd battle against had never heard of Ash before their battle. Feeling worried, Ash finally asked one question."How many trainers have beaten the league?"

    Gary let out a sigh.

    "Ash, that's the reason I didn't want to tell you about the league. Since the League was opened, one-thousand-six-hundred and seventy-four have challenged the league. Only forty-seven have made it to the final five. Out of those forty-seven, only five people have actually beaten the leagues. Three of those lost extremely close battles to the champions they went up against. Cynthia and Alder were the only ones to win who actually beat their challenge," Gary responded, feeling rather nervous towards Ash's reaction.

    "Only five?" Ash asked, astounded beyond belief," Are you sure?"

    "Positive," Gary responded as he looked Ash right in the eye,"Do you still think you can do this Ash?"

    Ash looked at the ground, frowning. He'd had high hopes, but now...it was obvious. Only the best of the best would win. Ash wasn't feeling too sure. Especially after what happened in Kalos.

    "Pi-Pikachu!" Pikachu cried as he walked up to Ash, a determined look on his face. Pokemon and partner locked eyes before Ash finally decided to look back up.

    "I'm in," Ash told Gary with a determined look in his eye.

    "Ash you and your Pokemon are going to have to be at their finest if you hope to beat the Finnx League," Professor Oak told Ash.

    "In thank case, I'm going to need to get the old group back together. This is something I can't pull off on my own, especially Brock and Max. I feel that if I'd have anyone of them along for Kalos and Unova, I would have done way better. If Brock can't come, then I'll try to see if Misty, Max, and May can. I want to do this challenge with them at my side," Ash told the small group listening. A spark of intrigue suddenly rose up in Ash's head as he looked over to Gary.

    "Gary, how did you know about this league anyway? I've must've talked to Cynthia and Alder at least a dozen times in the last few years that I journeyed through Sinnoh and Unova," Ash stated as he looked Gary quizzically.

    "Well um, the Finnx Archipelago has always been a source of knowing for researchers like me and Professor Oak. They're a pretty weird region. Pokemon from every other region can all be found there," Gary said, looking a bit nervous at the question but quickly changed the subject,"anyways Ash. You should really be wondering on your plan to gather up your friends."

    "Well, I'll start in Cerulean City since it's the closest. From there, I'll see if Misty can come and if not I'll probably see if I can find out where Brock is. As for Max, all I've got to do is tell May it'll be good learning experience for him. I heard about how the Pokemon League raised the starting trainer's age up to 12 so, if I hurry, I can tell May to ask him before he starts his journey. As for May, last I heard she was in Sinnoh, I'll get in contact with her," Ash said, beaming at his plan.

    "Ash you know the Sinnoh Grand Festival is today right?" Gary asked Ash. Ash gave him a puzzled look.

    "Wow, really? I had no idea," Ash said to himself. So much for keeping up with everything his friends were going through.

    "If I were you Ash, you should talk to them as soon as possible. Slateport will be the easiest way to get to the Islands but it isn't the only way. Make sure to tell them that, if they decide to go then they should take the first boat there. It'll be a long trip," Professor Oak advised. Ash nodded.

    "Thanks, both of you. Come on Pikachu let's get home," Ash told the small electric mouse.

    "Pika!" Pikachu responded as it hopped up onto Ash's shoulder. Ash turned to look at Bayleef who had also been listening in to the conversation.

    "Bayleef, make sure to tell everyone to start training super hard! In a few weeks, we're off to the Finnx League and everyone will need to be in tip-top shape, especially if we want to stand a chance against the leaders there," Ash explained to the grass type.

    "Bay!" Bayleef cried out, a happy cry as she hurried off to Swellow and Staraptor who were flying in the distance but were also the closest ones around.

    As Ash began his walk back to his house, a thousand questions were running through his mind. Ultimately, however, he realized that he would need every member of his team if he hoped to stand a chance against the Finnx League. Even those whom he'd had for only a while or never officially caught.


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    Well that's it for Chapter 1. To those who have read the Eclipse Islands by PrincessSelina then this chapter was probably very similar to her first chapter. I did my best to incorporate everything that was on a need-to-know basis for this chapter as well as show off my own style. Well, I hope you like and feel free to review.
     
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    Hello everyone, welcome to Chapter 2. I know it may come as a surprise to some of you who just started reading my fic, but here is chapter 2. I'd spent most of the morning anxiously staring at my computer screen then realized people might want to see more content before actually deciding to review. This is being brought in on a different perspective. While the last chapter catered to Ash, this one belongs to someone else's.

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    Chapter 2: Shock and Hope for a New Future

    "And it looks like it'll be Mystique going on to the final round to face off against Drew in the Grand Festival," Marian announced as the crowd erupted into cheers. May was in shock. She wasn't quite sure how it had happened, she'd been doing so well!

    "Good job May. That was a great round, you had me worried for a second there," Mystique said with a cheery smile. May only managed to give the other coordinator a half-hearted smile as she returned her Blastoise and Blaziken. Her mind was still going over the recent events of her loss. To say she was angry at herself was an understatement. Angry at losing but not sure how. As May left the arena, she came face to face with Drew. He gave her a sympathetic look.

    "You did your best out there May," Drew comforted as he moved forward and gave May a hug. It was a well-known fact that May and Drew were dating. Both of the two contests stars and had been extremely public about their relationship to the point that it wasn't a surprise to see a member of the media snapping a picture while May and Drew were at dinner. They had learned to ignore it.

    "I'm so confused. I was doing so well and then...then…," May stopped as she suddenly started bawling onto Drew's shoulder. Once again she had missed a Cup Win because she hadn't been as educated as she had thought.

    "Hey, how were you supposed to know her Pokemon could use those moves? She'd never even used those Pokemon in battle before, she must've been saving them for you," Drew muttered as he took May's hand and led her towards the Pokemon Center.

    "Won't my Pokemon see me as failures now? I promised them we would win the festival and here I am, nothing but bad news once again," May spoke. Tears still streamed down her face but she wasn't sobbing like she had been before. Drew looked down at May, with an almost angry expression on his face. He knew Mystique's tricks, and now he would get his revenge.

    "May, I promised you I would forfeit if I didn't see you in the finals. However, as you're boyfriend I'm not going to let this pain you how it is. I promise you May, I'll do everything I can to beat Mystique. I'm going to win for the both of us," Drew said as he wiped away May's tears. During May's journey in Sinnoh, May had quickly become rivals with a girl who went by the name Mystique. She had always been mysterious and was well known for keeping her Pokemon's moves a mystery. Usually, she'd win from dodging all the time. However, when she did use moves, they were usually brutally devastating and took advantage of explosions to deal illegal damage to her opponent's Pokemon. It was a well-known rule in contests that if an explosion occurred in the arena, then both coordinator's Pokemon would have to be still until the smoke cleared. Drew led May back to their room. While they were dating and were sharing a room, nothing had been happening sexually between Drew and May. They would usually keep to their own beds when going to sleep.

    "Drew, can you take my Pokemon to get healed for me. I want some time alone," May told Drew. Drew nodded in response and grabbed the two Pokeballs handed to him by May. He left her lying in bed and walked out of the room and into the current Pokemon Center's lobby. A Nurse Joy was present by the front desk and Drew left the Pokeballs with the Nurse with a room number so that they could be delivered there when they were healed.

    "May, I promise you I'm not going to lose," Drew muttered as he left the Pokemon Center to go train with his Pokemon before the next round.

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    Fireworks lit up the sky as May and Drew sat next to each other on the edge of Lake Valor. It was late and slightly chilly. A gold trophy stood between the couple. They were quiet, probably enjoy the lake view and the full moon while they could. The sky was cloudless and every star was visible in the sky.

    "Drew, I'm so proud of you," May said.

    "I'm not one to disappoint," Drew informed May, neither looking at each other, their eyes focused on the lake.

    "You know, I got a call from Ash today just before your battle. Apparently there's a new region that opened up, the Finnx Archipelago. It's supposed to be a super-advanced region with big stakes and bigger rewards for any who can beat it. Ash wants to gather the group and get us all together, and he thinks it might be a good idea to bring Max since he just started as a trainer. I was wondering, maybe we can take a break from contests for a while and go enjoy a new adventure in the Finnx Archipelago," May said, resting her head on Drew's shoulder, a small content smile on her face.

    Drew was quiet for a moment. A long time ago, the green haired boy had been rather jealous of Ash, who had spent close to two years traveling with May initially through Hoen and then Kanto. He'd heard some amazing rumors about the Finnx Archipelago being home to many new Pokemon and, quite honestly, he was a bit excited at the prospect.

    "Sure, when do we leave?" Drew asked his girlfriend.
    "Well, Ash says a boat leaves from Slateport in three weeks. That gives us enough time to get back to Hoen, and unwind for a bit before taking off right away again," May responded, yawning a bit.

    Taking note of his girl's yawn, Drew stood up. May was surprised by his sudden movements, but was greeted by Drew holding out his outstretched hand to May, who took it with a smile.

    "C'mon, you're getting tired," Drew said with a smile,"let's get you to bed." May wanted to argue but decided against it, once Drew made up his mind he was set. Letting out another yawn, she gave a drowsy nod and the two lovers walked, arm in arm, back to the Pokemon Center to prepare for the upcoming events.

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    And that's it for Chapter 2. I realize it might be a bit short, but it was only meant to let you experience the story from someone else's eyes, as well as showing off what exactly transpired at the Sinnoh Grand Festival. The next chapter will be coming soon provided a get some reviews but if not, I'll probably start to work on it after Game of Thrones comes out tonight. Hopefully, you all are enjoying the progression of this story so far.
     
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  • Keep in mind, I am writing this review to YOU and you only. I have not read PrincessStella's version, so I am reviewing only on your account of the story. I don't know what ideas you created or the ones she did.

    This story caught my eye, and I'm let's just say I'm glad it did. I really enjoyed these two chapters.

    The idea of the story was very creative, so props to PrincessStella. I like to hear that everyone is grown somewhat grown-up now, and I like that you had the League up the minimum trainer age to 12. I still don't get the fact that ten-year-old's can run around in the wild unsupervised...

    You really made the idea of the Finnx "region" believable, and I like that. I have read some fanfics based on the anime, but they weren't as...real, I guess. As in, this story is something that actually could have happened in the anime (aside for May and Drew dating, the anime people wouldn't do that).

    Story/plot wise, I only found one little error:


    "C'mon, you're getting tired," Drew said with a smile,"let's get you to bed." May wanted to argue but decided against it, once Drew made up his mind he was set. Letting out another yawn, she gave a drowsy nod and the two lovers walked, arm in arm, back to the Pokemon Center to prepare for the upcoming events.

    Wasn't May already at the hotel? Or did they just leave. It's probably just that.

    I found a couple punctuation/capitalization errors, mostly within dialogue. As in putting a period instead of a comma when there should have been a comma, then forgetting to even capitalize the next sentence. Stuff like that.

    Overall, great story, and I'll be back whenever there's a new chapter.
     
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  • I wouldn't display Ash as not liking his friends from gens 4-6. Sometimes it's hard to keep your dislike of them from overflowing into your fanfic, but I think it's important to keep Ash in character, and he was great friends with all of them in the anime. If you don't want them along, just use the reasons you've already created: Iris, Cilan, and Clemont are gym leaders, Bonnie can't travel without Clemont, Dawn is in the middle of a contest circuit, and for Serena you can say that Ash felt awkward around as he realized that she had a crush on him, when he only wanted to be friends.

    Also, when you said that the Sinnoh Grand Festival was that day, it was a bit confusing since Dawn is from Sinnoh. I'd recommend that you say where Dawn is (Hoenn, Kanto, Johto) when you say that she's in the middle of a contest circuit. That would clear things up.

    Overall great story so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
     

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    It kind of was wierd having Ash think so poorly about his traveling companions.
     
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    This story hasn't been posted in quite a few months. Please check the date of the last post in a thread before posting in it to make sure that you're not posting in an old thread.
     
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