A warstory?

A warstory?[THE PREVIOUS ONE'S CRAP]

Introduction:This is my first battle log,but before I write anything else,I need to make something very clear-




Yep,that's right.Stealth rock is all I put up, and sometimes not even that,as you will see in the following battle.


Some MORE things the readers of this post should know-

1.Whatever I did in the battle is in BLACK.
2.Whatever my opponent does is in WHITE.
3.The effects,side-effects and the after-effects are in SILVER.
4.My thoughts & comments are in italics.
5.AND I STILL HATE STALL BATTLES.

Now for the battle...

As most of you would know, Smogon server was banned for a fortnight;and here's something you WOULD NOT know- I was banned from the pc server coz I beat D_A with "only 2 crits" (and because I said how I like to grill Starfish,lol).So, I ended up in Team uber server and started laddering.



The following is by far the best I've fought there-


GoGo vs HAWK(which happens to be me)

Previous record : 1-1


My team-

And here are the rules-
-Sleep clause
-OHKO clause
-Timed battle
-Self-KO clause

Here goes...

Hawk sent out Azelf.
GoGo sent out Tyranitar.
Tyranitar's Sand stream whipped up a sandstorm.
A sandstorm brewed.
​

AAARRGHHH!!!!

That's all I can say.neither can I switch,nor can I SR and depend on focus sash.So the choice is obvious..

vs

Azelf used KABOOOOM (Explosion).
It's not very effective..
Tyranitar lost 74% of its health.
Hawk's Azelf fainted.
Tyranitar used Crunch.
But there was no target..
The sandstorm rages.
​

HAWK 5-6 GoGo

Pretty much as expected.I think of killing this beastie before it touches my precious pokemon,sooo...



Hawk sent out Scizor.

I predict a switch and accordingly..

vs

GoGo switched in Magnezone.
Scizor used Swords dance.​

Scizor's attack was sharply raised.
The sandstorm rages.

​

UGYRS^USXZKXRYafh!!!

Yep,I'm speechless again.I had forgotten that scizor had RAPED his team last time,but evidently, he hadn't.Let's just hope this thing isn't scarfed....

vs

Magnezone used Hidden power.
It's super effective.
Scizor lost 100% of its health.
Hawk's Scizor fainted.
The sandstorm rages.​

HAWK 4-6 GoGo


Well,at least it's scarfed.SOOOO....


Hawk sent out Kingdra.

Time to get things right..

vs

GoGo switched in Tyranitar.
Kingdra used Rain dance.​

The sandstorm stopped.
Rain began to fall.
Rain continues to fall.

​

So he wishes to sacrifice T-Tar. Fine with me..

vs

GoGo switched in Magnezone.
Kingdra used Hydro pump.​

Magnezone lost 100% of its health.
GoGo's Magnezone fainted.
Kingdra lost 10% of its health.
Rain continues to fall.
​

HAWK 4-5 GoGo

On second thought,I guess he realizes that the rain must be stopped.

GoGo sent out Tyranitar.​

Tyranitar's Sand stream whipped up a sandstorm.
Tyranitar sang "RAIN RAIN GO AWAY".
The rain stopped.
A sandstorm brewed.
​

I fear this might be another scarf, and soo..

vs

Hawk switched in Bronzong.
Tyranitar used Crunch.​

Bronzong lost 44% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
​

Out comes my Mr.Dependable.

vs

Tyranitar used Dragon Dance.​

Tyranitar's speed was raised.
Tyranitar's attack was raised.
Bronzong used Gyro ball.
It's super effective.
Tyranitar lost 26% of its health.
GoGo's Tyranitar fainted.
The sandstorm rages.​

HAWK 4-4 GoGo

I have no idea what he was thinking..meh


GoGo sent out Gastrodon.

EWWWW..

vs

Gastrodon used Stockpile.​

Gastrodon stockpiled 1.
Gastrodon's defence was raised.
Gastrodon's special defence was raised.
Bronzong used KABOOOMM(that's right, explosion again)
Gastrodon lost 73% of its health.
Hawk's Bronzongg fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

​

HAWK 3-4 GoGo

Stockpiles saves that snarfcake,then.Whatever..


Hawk sent out Ludicolo.

vs

Ludicolo used Energy ball.​

It's super effective.
Gastrodon lost 27% of its health.
The Rindo berry weakened Energy ball's power.
GoGo's Gastrodon fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Ludicolo is buffeted by the sandstorm.
Ludicolo lost 6% of its health.

​

HAWK 3-3 GoGo

GoGo sent out Scizor.


Here I face a dilemma.I don't think H pump will OHKO,soo..

vs

Ludicolo used Rain Dance.​

The sandstorm stopped.
Rain began to fall.
Scizor used Bug Bite.
It's super effective.
Ludicolo lost 93% of its health.
Hawk's Ludicolo fainted.
Scizor lost 10% of its health.
Rain continues to fall.

​

The sacrifice had to be made.

HAWK 2-3 GoGo


Hawk sent out Kingdra.

vs

Scizor used Bullet punch.
It's not very effective..
Kingdra lost 14% of its health.
Scizor lost 10%of tis health.
Kingdra used Hydro pump.
Scizor lost 80% of its health.
GoGo's Scizor fainted.
Kingdra lost 10% of its health.
​

HAWK 2-2 GoGo

I hope to Rape his team again,but evidently,he has other ideas.

GoGo sent out Mammoswine.

vs

Kingdra used Hydro pump.​

It's super effective.
Mammoswine lost 99% of its health.
Mammoswine hung on using its Focus sash.
Mammoswine used Endeavor.
Kingdra lost 63% of its health.
Rain continues to fall.
​

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

yep,speechless again...

It is now that I take the decision of the match.Ice shard's coming..
Kabutops will get 1 turn of rain....my opponent hates Stalls like me...
So I take a BIG gamble...

vs

Hawk switched in Kabutops.
Mammoswine used Ice shard.
It's not very effective..
Kabutops lost 14% of its health.
Rain continues to fall.​

vs

Mammoswine used Ice shard.
It's not very effective..
Kabutops lost 14% of its health.
Kabutops used Waterfall.
It's super effective.
Mammoswine lost 1% of its health.
GoGo's Mammoswine fainted.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
The rain stopped.
​

HAWK 1-2 GoGo

I keep my fingers crossed.....

Hawk:C'mon MOVE it

GoGo sent out Aggron.


PHEW!!!!

vs

Kabutops used Waterfall.​

It's super effective.
Aggron lost 76% of its health.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
Aggron used Earthquake.
It's super effective.
Kabutops lost 52% of its health.
Hawk's Kabutops fainted.
​

HAWK 1-1 GoGo

Hawk sent out Kingdra.


This better hit...

vs

Kingdra used Hydro pump.​

It's super effective.
Aggron lost 24%of its health.
GoGo's Aggron fainted.
Kingdra lost 1% of its health.
Hawk's kingdra fainted.
​

HAWK 0-0 GoGo

GoGo:gg
Hawk:gg

GoGO has left the room.
Hawk wins.

Epilogue: So a tie it was...due to the Self-KO clause.But my opponent realizes that he would've lost if it was any other server,and gracefully accepts defeat.Yipee..


To sum it up..

Yes,it did not last for 15 minutes;yes,it isn't the sort of thing one would call "an epic battle", but you'll have to admit- that's as close as it gets...


THE DUDES:
1.Kingdra for being the GOD of all water types.
2.Bronzong,for a body of steel (or is it bronze?? lol)

AND THE DUDS:
1.Scizor, for doing nothing and getting RAPED by a magnet.

Inference: Mid-game Mammoswine@ focus sash WITHOUT SR FUUUCKS.

Here's my opponent's team in their order of appearance-

Well,there you have it.It's only my first log, so all kinds of suggestions,comments and corrections are most welcome.

P.S.: 1.Most of you must be wondering why on earth I posted the previous one.Well, THAT WAS PURELY ACCIDENTAL, and I was soo busy editing that I never saw it before Aura closed it.
2. I like it how the server can't stop me from writing F*** if I put an extra topping of "u"S...lol

I'm sorry, but this battle log was just...ugh. The formatting is bad, the battle itself wasn't even worthy of a log, and your commentary is completely lacking: You shouldn't just comment on what you just did, you need to bring out your though process, what you think you're going to do next turn, etc.

I'd just go read the newer posts in the Battle Log Archive to see what is really necessary (And no, going all out with CSS like Oppo isn't necessary, but it is awesome XD)

Jake♫ said:

The formatting is bad, the battle itself wasn't even worthy of a log, and your commentary is completely lacking: You shouldn't just comment on what you just did, you need to bring out your though process, what you think you're going to do next turn, etc.

Click to expand...

Well,I've done some editing here and there,so you might have another look.
And I guess you're kinda right- I dunno why I like this battle...maybe because it did NOT last for AGES,or maybe because this was one of the closest finishes I've had....

Meh a so so battle. I don't know why you didn't Stealth Rock off the bat, it's a given on rain teams. Your opponent made some bad play, like setting up with T-tar against Bronzong, when control of the skies was key to success.

Jake pretty much summed up everything for me in a more harsh way xD