Okay guys, I've been noticing that the posts [mine included] have been entirely too short. I'd like it if everyone made longer posts so that it makes the RP look better. I know it's kinda hard because your post looks longer while you type it, and when you actually post it, it looks WAY shorter because your sentences are stretched out. Just hit the preview button as you do your post to keep track of the length that way you know how long your post is going to look. ^_^
@Cariger: you've been doing a good job with your posts. They've been of good length and filled with detail. Keep it up ^^
@SilverTail: your posts have been pretty good, and you've been doing pretty well with detail. Just more length in your posts will be appreciated ^^;
@TheOldKoot: your posts aren't bad Koot, its just your sentence formatting that needs some work. Remember, dialogue can be a tricky thing. Remember, new paragraphs when the dialogue changes between DIFFERENT speakers. If your character is still speaking then there's no need for a new paragraph and new set of quotes with each statement your character makes. If your character does some sort of action or speaks at different times, just break the dialogue. For example:
"I am a bomb," said Uncle Rus. His mustache twitched as he spoke. "My explosions are loud."
You see? Rus spoke, but at different times. The dialogue was broken but Rus was still the one speaking. I just broke the dialogue because he spoke at different times. Just study simple paragraph form more, and your posts will look much better. Adding more detail will make your posts look better too. I'm sorry if it seems like I'm attacking you, I'm just trying to help. ^^;;
I'm really not trying to criticize anyone, I just don't want a mod coming in and closing the RP because of something as simple as post length/formatting. I'll do my part to make my posts look better, and I'd appreciate it if everyone else did their best too ^_^