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The Beginning
(Forsaken Wings is a story based on a fusion of the Pokémon Adventures Manga and the original Pokémon Games. This story is taken (mostly) from the point of view of an experienced Pokémon trainer: Ramo Razez. He is a citizen of Hoenn, who has numerous Pokémon championship qualifications under his belt but has never beaten a master. One day he finds himself on the run from the Pokémon Leagues because someone framed him for a massive murder. This is his story.)
Ramo Razez, the twenty year old seasoned trainer, sprinted through the darkness. While he heard the cries of a numerous amount of zubats, bat-like creatures that fed off the lifeblood of living animals, running through his head, he laughed to himself. He broke two basic tenants that even poke-school graduates have down. One, pack light. He was weighted down with several survival supplies that he thought he needed. Second off, small little bats are actually dangerous.
Loud screeches had rendered him temporarily deaf, so he didn't notice the young hiker girl until he smashed into her.
She crumpled, and hit the ground hard. He turned around sharply and shifted the bandanna on his neck to cover his face. She wasn't moving but her chest was moving up and down in a steady motion.
He threw the unconscious female over his shoulder and continued to sprint towards the entrance. His legs burned from exhaustion and he cursed himself for not being more careful. Just when he felt like stopping, he saw the light at the end of the tunnel.
The land that came crashing into view was breathtaking. His black shoes smashed into the rocky ground for traction and he stopped a few feet away from the edge of a cliff. Patches and lines of forestry populated the landscape, with a few lakes here and there. Ramo realized how high he was off ground level. A fall from this distance would kill even the most sturdy of Pokémon.
The zubats began to close in and there was no way down that wouldn't involve tossing the hiker girl down. Ramo was a fugitive but he was no murderer.
The zubats flew into the setting sun, because their sonar could detect nothing that resembled the human they were pursuing. After a few minutes, they stopped their wails and returned back to their nests.
Ramo slid the girl off his body and gently onto the ground. The stalagmite he used to mask his and the hiker girl's body had covered his black hoodie with dirt. He sighed and brushed some of it off and took a good look at the girl.
She was a dirty blonde, with small eyebrows and a slightly angular face. She looked about nineteen or twenty, but Ramo couldn't say for sure. Her small soft lips trickled slightly red from the impact that knocked her out. Pangs of guilt hit the young man as he ran his fingers through her hair and flinched as she stirred. He pushed his sunglasses closer to his face as she awoke.
Her cry was enough to stir a resting Golbat, a much more aggressive and larger evolution of the zubat, from his nest. With the most silent of wing flaps, he descended down towards the two trainers.
Ramo dropped her and felt embarrassment color the features hidden under his guise. His sunglasses flashed red so he turned and saw the golbat swooping down to claw at the young girl. He turned swiftly and threw his back into the golbat.
He flinched as he felt the creature tear through the armored clothing under his shirt and rip flesh off his back. To make matters worse, the impact of the Golbat was enough to send Ramo toward the edge.
The girl screamed as she saw the young man plummet down.
A white flash blinded her for a moment before a white creature with a gray underside came into view. In one hand, it caught the young man and in the other, it clung to the cliff. The Aggron, the pokemon that Ramo had sent out, threw his trainer to safety and leaped at the Golbat which had begun to retreat upon view of the giant Pokémon. Aggron jumped towards it and captured the vampiric bat in both hands.
The girl looked away when she heard the crunch of the creature's bones breaking. Instead, she looked down at the young man who had landed a few feet away from her.
"You tried to kidnap me! What is wrong with you?" She yelled and kicked him as he tried to get onto his feet.
Ramo felt his ribs take the impact of the hit and grunted in pain. He rolled over to his stomach and felt warmth seep from the wound on his back.
"Get away…" Ramo said lowly between gritted teeth.
The Aggron began to make his way to the platform.
"But then again, you did save me. And I can't help but to wonder what's under that mask.."
She whispered as she kneeled next to him and swiftly slid down the bandanna. He tried to stop her, but his hands were slapped away.
"You're..."She stuttered as she backed away.
Well aware of his notoriety, Ramo removed his sunglasses and revealed his dark, black and sharp eyes. He stood, this time without a reaction from her.
"You didn't see me. I'm not here." He growled, his heartbeat racing when he realized he had already been spotted.
Aggron's head peaked from the cliffside behind him.
It only took her a moment to realize that they were putting too much weight on the fragile rock and she quickly ran back into the cave.
He slid the bandanna over his face and for a brief moment, assumed that it was his intimidation that had sent her running.
Just then the platform cracked and sent the two humans and the aggron hurtling towards a massive fall. The girl screamed and Ramo turned down to face the ground.
Aggron wrapped his arms around them as if to sacrifice himself to absorb the blow.
Ramo returned his pokemon into his greatball and captured the girl's hands in his. However, she had shut her eyes and the sensation of free falling had masked the feeling of his hands in hers.
Another bright light appeared and a large monstrous blue and black three headed creature appeared beneath them. The monster's loud screech filled the air and Ramo flinched.
"Quiet, Hira, you're going to attract unneeded attention." He warned his Pokémon as he patted her center head. He then turned back to the girl.
"I am going to guide us down, I'm going to go west and you're going east. Understand?" He said with a low voice. The girl frowned and nodded without hesitation. She was smart enough not to argue with world's most wanted.
As they were slowly guided down, Hira spotted three yellow creatures approaching them from the horizon. Ramo took a deep breath to prepare himself. The sight of such a rare dragon must have triggered the alarm of the people beneath him. Ramo turned to the girl and frowned before speaking in a gentle voice.
"I'm sorry that I got you involved in this. Kidnapping you was an accident. I will turn myself in." Ramo told her.
"My name is Alice, and thank you. Ramo Razez of Hoenn." She replied timidly. "But tell me is it tr-" She was interrupted when the Dragonites who had suddenly accelerated to cover the distance began to surround them and growl.
"She's not with me. I kidnapped her. Go ahead and charge me with that too. I won't fight." He told the Dragonites as Hira held her dragon-breath in her throat. When they attacked anyway, Ramo realized just how deep of a conspiracy he had found himself in.
(Forsaken Wings is a story based on a fusion of the Pokémon Adventures Manga and the original Pokémon Games. This story is taken (mostly) from the point of view of an experienced Pokémon trainer: Ramo Razez. He is a citizen of Hoenn, who has numerous Pokémon championship qualifications under his belt but has never beaten a master. One day he finds himself on the run from the Pokémon Leagues because someone framed him for a massive murder. This is his story.)
Ramo Razez, the twenty year old seasoned trainer, sprinted through the darkness. While he heard the cries of a numerous amount of zubats, bat-like creatures that fed off the lifeblood of living animals, running through his head, he laughed to himself. He broke two basic tenants that even poke-school graduates have down. One, pack light. He was weighted down with several survival supplies that he thought he needed. Second off, small little bats are actually dangerous.
Loud screeches had rendered him temporarily deaf, so he didn't notice the young hiker girl until he smashed into her.
She crumpled, and hit the ground hard. He turned around sharply and shifted the bandanna on his neck to cover his face. She wasn't moving but her chest was moving up and down in a steady motion.
He threw the unconscious female over his shoulder and continued to sprint towards the entrance. His legs burned from exhaustion and he cursed himself for not being more careful. Just when he felt like stopping, he saw the light at the end of the tunnel.
The land that came crashing into view was breathtaking. His black shoes smashed into the rocky ground for traction and he stopped a few feet away from the edge of a cliff. Patches and lines of forestry populated the landscape, with a few lakes here and there. Ramo realized how high he was off ground level. A fall from this distance would kill even the most sturdy of Pokémon.
The zubats began to close in and there was no way down that wouldn't involve tossing the hiker girl down. Ramo was a fugitive but he was no murderer.
The zubats flew into the setting sun, because their sonar could detect nothing that resembled the human they were pursuing. After a few minutes, they stopped their wails and returned back to their nests.
Ramo slid the girl off his body and gently onto the ground. The stalagmite he used to mask his and the hiker girl's body had covered his black hoodie with dirt. He sighed and brushed some of it off and took a good look at the girl.
She was a dirty blonde, with small eyebrows and a slightly angular face. She looked about nineteen or twenty, but Ramo couldn't say for sure. Her small soft lips trickled slightly red from the impact that knocked her out. Pangs of guilt hit the young man as he ran his fingers through her hair and flinched as she stirred. He pushed his sunglasses closer to his face as she awoke.
Her cry was enough to stir a resting Golbat, a much more aggressive and larger evolution of the zubat, from his nest. With the most silent of wing flaps, he descended down towards the two trainers.
Ramo dropped her and felt embarrassment color the features hidden under his guise. His sunglasses flashed red so he turned and saw the golbat swooping down to claw at the young girl. He turned swiftly and threw his back into the golbat.
He flinched as he felt the creature tear through the armored clothing under his shirt and rip flesh off his back. To make matters worse, the impact of the Golbat was enough to send Ramo toward the edge.
The girl screamed as she saw the young man plummet down.
A white flash blinded her for a moment before a white creature with a gray underside came into view. In one hand, it caught the young man and in the other, it clung to the cliff. The Aggron, the pokemon that Ramo had sent out, threw his trainer to safety and leaped at the Golbat which had begun to retreat upon view of the giant Pokémon. Aggron jumped towards it and captured the vampiric bat in both hands.
The girl looked away when she heard the crunch of the creature's bones breaking. Instead, she looked down at the young man who had landed a few feet away from her.
"You tried to kidnap me! What is wrong with you?" She yelled and kicked him as he tried to get onto his feet.
Ramo felt his ribs take the impact of the hit and grunted in pain. He rolled over to his stomach and felt warmth seep from the wound on his back.
"Get away…" Ramo said lowly between gritted teeth.
The Aggron began to make his way to the platform.
"But then again, you did save me. And I can't help but to wonder what's under that mask.."
She whispered as she kneeled next to him and swiftly slid down the bandanna. He tried to stop her, but his hands were slapped away.
"You're..."She stuttered as she backed away.
Well aware of his notoriety, Ramo removed his sunglasses and revealed his dark, black and sharp eyes. He stood, this time without a reaction from her.
"You didn't see me. I'm not here." He growled, his heartbeat racing when he realized he had already been spotted.
Aggron's head peaked from the cliffside behind him.
It only took her a moment to realize that they were putting too much weight on the fragile rock and she quickly ran back into the cave.
He slid the bandanna over his face and for a brief moment, assumed that it was his intimidation that had sent her running.
Just then the platform cracked and sent the two humans and the aggron hurtling towards a massive fall. The girl screamed and Ramo turned down to face the ground.
Aggron wrapped his arms around them as if to sacrifice himself to absorb the blow.
Ramo returned his pokemon into his greatball and captured the girl's hands in his. However, she had shut her eyes and the sensation of free falling had masked the feeling of his hands in hers.
Another bright light appeared and a large monstrous blue and black three headed creature appeared beneath them. The monster's loud screech filled the air and Ramo flinched.
"Quiet, Hira, you're going to attract unneeded attention." He warned his Pokémon as he patted her center head. He then turned back to the girl.
"I am going to guide us down, I'm going to go west and you're going east. Understand?" He said with a low voice. The girl frowned and nodded without hesitation. She was smart enough not to argue with world's most wanted.
As they were slowly guided down, Hira spotted three yellow creatures approaching them from the horizon. Ramo took a deep breath to prepare himself. The sight of such a rare dragon must have triggered the alarm of the people beneath him. Ramo turned to the girl and frowned before speaking in a gentle voice.
"I'm sorry that I got you involved in this. Kidnapping you was an accident. I will turn myself in." Ramo told her.
"My name is Alice, and thank you. Ramo Razez of Hoenn." She replied timidly. "But tell me is it tr-" She was interrupted when the Dragonites who had suddenly accelerated to cover the distance began to surround them and growl.
"She's not with me. I kidnapped her. Go ahead and charge me with that too. I won't fight." He told the Dragonites as Hira held her dragon-breath in her throat. When they attacked anyway, Ramo realized just how deep of a conspiracy he had found himself in.
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