Angelic Awakening

Okay, critics welcomed.

You play as a male fighter, by whatever name you choose. You were born in a kingdom called Urwq and have lived there since. Your mother and father were both great soldires that went into battle often. It was the fact that you had grown up with your parents gone that made you think nothing of the fact that, after three days, they had not returned from a battle. It was that day, though, that a maid from the castle entered your home and told you of your parents death. You felt on that day, and every day since, great rage toward the thing that killed your parents. It has been five years since that horrible day, and now you are sixteen. You have gathered all of your closest friends and gone to the castle to request premission to hunt after the demon Damiq. It starts out as a simple quest for revenge, but you find out that destiny has much greater plans for you...

Here are some screen shots!!! I get some more soon!!!

The maps are a bit plain, so try filling them up with furniture, trees, etc. or make them a bit smaller. Other than that; nice plot and start. Hope you do well!

Yeah! Sounds interesting. PM me when it's finished! I want to play it!

Well! I agree, they're a bit unoccupied... Anyways, best of luck making the game!;)

more screenshots

Okay, instead of choosing the name you play as Hiyae (He-yay). Okay, I have got some more work done, so here are some more screenies!!!!! Oh, can anyone guess what destiny has in store for the hero?

Cool screens, but a bit plain...
The buy menu looks neat, but you can make it your style instead of the RMXP one...

Keep up the work though. :)

~Jeff

nice, very nice. Let me know when it's done. The buy system is very clean...

your cute little signature pic attracted me to this post :P

Hello, sorry it took so long to post here. I was at my grandma's and she doesn't have RMXP. I am working on the battle right now, and only have one shot of it, so please be patient. I am working as fast as I can with all my make-up school work and parents. (Ug, parents!)

Jeff (I can call you that, right?), how do I make the buy screen my own? Please, try to be nice to me. I already feel like a complete idiot... :(

well, i don't have as many screenies as i would like. my mother is rushing me.

ANYONE have ANY idea on what will happen to our vengful heros?

tell me if it sucks, really!!!

Hmmm, maybe people don't like this idea? I am working very hard. So far it is going okay, but tell me anything that could be improved! (please do not state yet again that the screens are a bit plain. I am working on that.)

you really should think of filling in the areas btw nice game!

This game is totally awesome and I'm not saying that just because your my twin. I think the guy will find the thing.

Jeff (I can call you that, right?), how do I make the buy screen my own? Please, try to be nice to me. I already feel like a complete idiot...

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Well, I am. I'm just giving opinions to you, saying maybe make a different layout or perhaps customize it, rather than using the RMXP default one.