Pokemon Aruma Region: Adventures

INDEX------------------------------------------------------------------------ What Characters are in What Chapters.
(N/R= Not Released)
~ VOLUME 1: The Beggining~
Chapter 1-Meet Lukas!; The Attack of Tailow!. [Willer Saller, Lukas York]
Chapter 2-Vs Elekid . [Willer Saller, Lukas York]
Chapter 3-Near's Story! Vs. Machop, Climb Higher and Higher! [Near]
Chapter 4-A new...Hero!? Vs Koffing! Protect Jordan! [Willer Saller, Jordan Day]
Chapter 5-Oh Princess, Where Art Thou?; Vs Mr. Mime. [Ryan Bondage]
Chapter 6-Poisonous Flatulence! Vs Mr Mime (Part II) [Ryan Bondage]
Chapter 7-The Two Faced Ghost. [Jordan Day, Sincro Orcin]
Chapter 8-Lukas Returns Vs. Corphish. One Hell of a Shock! [Lukas York]
Chapter 9-The Hyper Cutter Vs. Poocheyena! [Lukas York]
Chapter 10- Love is a Lie! [Near]

~Volume 2:Road to the Cup~
Chapter 11- Gotcha [Near]
Chapter 12- So Guillible! Vs. Hitmonlee! [Near]
Chapter 13- The Safari Zone! [Willer Saller]
Chapter 14- The Heavens Await! Vs. Geodude. [Lukas York]
Chapter 15- Night Assult.Vs. Murkrow. [Lukas York]
Chapter 16- The Abyss. Vs. Nuzleaf. [Willer Saller]
Chapter 17- Tauros and Milktank Ranch Perrils! Vs. Mankey [Willer Saller, Jordan Day]

~Volume 3: Christmas Cup~
Chapter 18- Into the Arena Vs. Combee![Willer Saller,Near,Elias,Sincro Orcin]
Chapter 19- Nolan the Air Master & The Monk! Vs. Natu and Vs. Kadabra![Near and Sincro Orcin]
Chapter 20- Semi Finals! VS. Spiritomb and Sealeo [Willer Saller and Sincro Orcin]
Chapter 21-Panic at the Colosseum [Jordan Day]
Chapter 22:And the Winner is... Vs. Charmeleon!? [Sincro Orcin, Willer Saller]




This, my friends, Is my first Fan Fic. Please point out flaws and PLEASE comments. Im trying to keep chapters short so they're not a snore-fest. Anyways on to the Fan Fic.

First of all i'd like to point out that it's a fan fic about my RP site, so there will be ALOT of main characters and even more so when more people join and start their journeys, everyone is guaranteed a spot in the fan fic. Now keep in mind I made my site at least 2 months before news of Pokemon Ranger 2 came out so know this; I DID NOT copy the name "Aruma" from Ranger, in fact , if anything, they copied me and simply added an I making it Arumia >_>

This Fic is rated PG-13



Chapter 1: Meet Lukas! The Attack of Tailow!

The winter winds sliced through the sand.The air cold, the sky cloudy, it wasn't really the best day to be in Cascade Beach. It was wintertime so only trainers would be in the beach in this day. However a certain trainer was there for the feel of the beach, the sound of the ocean; Lukas York.

He was a young trainer who took apprentice under a low ranking professor who worked in Cascade Beach. Evidently this boy was the first young hero of our tale. Well him and another boy that just set foot in the Cascade Port and the land of Aruma for the first time ever. Oh well you'll hear more about him later.


Lukas was a young boy, 14. Been living here for about 3 months. 1 year ago the land of Aruma was discovered by explorers. It was in a dangerous sea that had an awkward magnetic frequency, which probably explains why it took so long to discover. Truths was the weird frequencies made airplanes useless in that strange ocean which we now call the Aruma Ocean. Aruma was the perfect land for trainers. All climates, all terrains, and a land where all pokemon could exist! The Pokemon League Association sent a group of powerful trainers into the dangerous land to clean it up a bit and set up towns. A few months later and the land of Aruma was opened to not only trainers but anyone who was interested in going there. But make no mistake, it was a Trainer Haven.

Lukas had brown hair that spiked to the right. His eyes had a piercing feel to them with a small hint of amber to them. He donned white skin and moderately tall for his age. He wore a navy blue short-sleeved shirt with a small eagle on the right sleeve. He had a black belt holding his brown khaki pants, on that belt there was a single (opened) pokeball. He was sitting on the sandy beach, slightly irritated by the blowing winds flinging sand at his face. However he was smiling, despite the cold and the wind. His elekid was next to him smiling to, a pretty low level one at that. The little thing probably didn't even know any electric attacks! Lukas stood up and stretched.

"Cold day huh Elekid?" He smiled as he heard a small crack.

"Kid" replied Elekid scratching his horn...plug...head.
You know that other 'hero' I was talking about? Well it's his part to come in.


At that same time in Cascade Port....

"Wait up, idiot!" yelled the boy, same age as Lukas, as he chased a Tailow that was flying towards the beach. They had just arrived at the port and he released Tailow for one second, let the recently recieved bird get a little air...NOW look what happened!
Tailow noticed a trainer from afar. It grinned, or attempted to with it's beak. It increased it's speed, it sliced through the air, it aimed at the innocent trainer and rammed into it with a spiraling headbutt.



Back in the beach...

Lukas fell to the ground having just been tackled by a Tailow. Elekid jumped infront of his injured Trainer and glared at the opposing Tailow who still had the grin on it's face.
They just met for the first time but they were about to rip each other apart when the Tailow's trainer stepped in.
"Tailow what are you- OH MY GOD YOU KILLED THAT KID!" Yelled the trainer as he bent down and inspected Lukas. He put his hand over his chest to check if his heart was beating. Can't blame him, this trainer was no doctor.

"I'm ok..." said Lukas getting up. There was a slight glare...but it might have been the Trainer's imagination. His amber eyes shone brightly as he clutched his sides. Tailow must have hit HARD. He smiled a bit and took a breath. That was unexpected.

"Heh heh...Sorry. Tailow gets a bit agitated when he wants to fight." said the Trainer scratching his black, wild hair. He wore goggles over his eyes, large shorts and a T-Shirt with a bull insignia on the back. There was a large coat hanging off his back like a cape, but he didn't put it on despite the cold. He wore sandals too. What was he, anti-cold?
The Trainer then grinned a frightening grin.

"You a trainer?" he asked reaching into his pocket and pulling out a pokedex; a tool given to all trainers who visited Aruma.

"Only the best in Cascade Beach!" lied Lukas as he pointed at himself and Elekid tensed up and began rotating it's arms...as if it could perform an electric attack. It was making small sparks, trying to scare Tailow, without a doubt. It had little to no effect. Tailow laughed a bit. Pretty cocky ain't it?

"I do believe those are fightin' words, no?" asked Lukas. "At least let me know your name."

The trainer grinned. His coat flailing in the air like a cape.

"Willer Saller" said the Trainer, who we now know is named Willer.
The name Saller was a name that has rung up in the Aruma Underground, and most veteran trainers. But not this Saller, another man named Saller who had caused an outrage in Aruma shortly before...

And heres Chapter 2. Next chapter introduces a new main character.

Cascade Beach-

As the wind blew through the sand and flung them at the two boys they tensed up for a battle. It was mutual. If a trainer sees another trainer, he has the right to challenge the other. A true trainer shouldn't mind and should take this as a chance to better him or herself.
Lukas pulled out his pokedex and investigated the opponent's pokemon, which Willer used as an opportunity for the first-strike; Speed was a big part of the battle and that first hit can change anything.

"Jet! Tackle him!" called Willer from the sidelines using Tailow's nickname. Jet flew towards the opponent as low as it could, leaving a stream of sand behind. It tensed up when it was around 2 yards away from the target, the black stripped Elekid.

"Elekid, get im' " yelled Lukas hurriedly.
Elekid launched it's fist forward to deliver a punch, a move any pokemon with an arm should be able to perform. Tailow saw the attack coming and at the last second tilted to the left dodging it by 2 centimeters. However this also made it miss the tackle. Tailow turned around, and faced the Elekid, Elekid did the same. The rivals awaited a command.

"Jet, Attack!" said Willer cooly. He was having no trouble with the blowing sands because of his goggles, unlike his adversary who was quite irritated. Willer took note of his.

"Grab it's wing!" called out Lukas as he grinned at the foe. No need for electric attacks when you have an Elekid who's very agile and good reflexes.
Elekid reached for a wing when Tailow dived even lower, centimeters off the ground and headbutted Elekid's stomach, right on the black lightning mark.

"KID" it managed to cough out. It fell on it's bottom and glared at the opponent, trying to think of a comeback, but Tailow was two steps ahead and launched a barrage of 'Peck' on the open foe. It hit multiple parts of it's torso which sent it rolling towards it's trainer. Lukas bent down and patted it.

"Can you still fight?" he asked sympathetically. Elekid nodded and hopped back up,it's body was beginning to create small,hot, wire-like sparks.
Tailow, however, was not in such a good shape. Despite the face that he was yet to be hit he seemed troubled. He was on the floor, head hid inbetween his wings, body shaking slightly.

"Jet...what happened!" yelled Willer worriedly.
Jet looked up and smiled. It was fighting it. Fighting the fact that it was now paralyzed!
Elekid's body emits a powerful static which can cause a light paralysis on contact. And that's exactly what happened to Jet the Tailow. Nevertheless it smiled as if reassuring Willer that everything was ok. For now.

"Elekid, Quick Attack!" yelled Lukas. Elekid dashed at Tailow at amazing speeds and hit it with a strong punch, sending Tailow flying to the right. Tailow stopped itself in mid-air, slowly beating it's wings. It's eyes were burning with rage. It's body was surrounded with a powerful aura. Its ability was now activated; Guts!

"Fight it jut a little bit longer!" chanted Willer.

"Gust!" he yelled and in unison Tailow beat it's wings rapidly creating a strong wind aimed at the sand. Both Elekid and Lukas were clueless of what Tailow and Willer had in mind but they soon realized as they glanced at the mini sand-storm that the gust created. Elekid and Lukas shielded their eyes as many sand grains blew towards them.

"Where...where the heck is he!?" grunted Lukas trying to see through the sand. He could see Elekid looking around curelessly and a small shadow coming from behind him through a sand cloud. Suddenly a black object came spiraling out of the sand cloud and slammed Elekid on the back. Elekid was not expecting that he glanced back and saw Tailow bashing his skull on it's striped back!

"How do you like our Flying Arrow!" taunted Willer. The sand eventually cleared revealing Tailow perched on top of the unconcious Elekid.

Finished Chapter 3. Some critism would be nice...=D

For those who are wondering what the map of Aruma is like, this is a vague demonstration.

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h119/CaptainSmoker/Map.jpg

Chapter 3:
Near's Story! Vs. Machop, Climb Higher and Higher!

----------------------Heaven Peak's Mountain--------------------

"Who ever thought of putting a dang mountain all the way up there!?!" complained Near as he squinted up towards the top of the mountain called Heaven's Peak. Heaven Peak was a town that rested on top of a large mountain, a city mostly for trainers that want to better themselves. This included the rookie trainer, Near.

Near was young and pretty smart, albeit he could be annoying as hell. He already had two Pokemon in his arsenal and was aiming for more. He had pitch black hair and spiked to the right side, had green eyes and white skin, even whiter in the freezing wintertime breeze. He wore a red velvet scarf around his neck, a white T-shirt with some sort of black half-jacket that was like a basic jacket but it barely covered his rib cage. Some sort of fashion thing, who knows. He had a spankin' nice,shiny belt and black jeans.

Today he was going to climb Heaven's Peak. It's not all that big, if you follow the road it should get you there in a few days, maybe 2-3 at the most. Unfortunately for him there was a rather large Onix blocking the way so he was going to climb around it and take the road. He looked at a large cliff sticking out of the mountain, the shape of a rectangular prism . He noticed something up there. A Machop was taking a rest on that ledge.

"Ah...a Machop! That could be useful!" he laughed. This woke the alert Machop up. It stood up and glared down the ledge to see the trainer looking back, a Pokeball
in his hands. Machop knew where this was going.

Near threw the ball towards the machop it spiraled towards the pokemon. Trying to catch it at full stamina from the front? Maybe Near isn't too smart after all!
Machop ducked , the ball flew a good 7 inches above him and slammed into the mountain wall. Machop was just about to gloat about his great dodge when he saw a big flash behind him. Machop turned around to see the ball opening and a Pokemon flying out of it, it's fist coming towards Machop's chest.
BAM!

Machop was struck on the chest and soared away from the ledge towards the ground. He hit it with a loud thud. '
Not so stupid now, am I?' thought Near.

Machop quickly bounced back up and quickly glanced behind at the Trainer who was just standing there, scarf dancing in the wind. Machop then turned his head around and squinted upwards, through the wind and the snow he could see an absent-minded Croagunk staring off into nothing.

Machop got in a crouched stance, like a Cross-Country runner right before hes about to run.And then zoom! It blazed towards the ledge at an amazing speed. With no effort he ran up the steep, steep slope, his arms quickly anchoring himself up. Such an expert climbing technique could only be...

"Woah, it knows Rock Climb too!? I MUST HAVE IT!" laughed Near looking at his Croagunk and nodding. Croagunk merely stared into space, as if he couldn't hear the Machop quickly approaching the top of the snow covered cliff.

In a less than a second Machop was almost to the top of the ledge, it drew it's fist back and reared a punch. He let it loose right on the edge of the cliff, cracking a large chunk and sending a mass of rock and snow up into the air, it's fist still soaring towards Croagunk's chin. There was no way to dodge now!

But Croagunk did anyways. Right as the fist was about to arrive him he swayed back a mere centimeter making Machop miss the punch and soar into the air. It landed on the cliff with a left handed punch aimed downwards, which Croagunk also dodged by jumping behind, the same absent-minded look on his face.

"Croagunk's ability, Anticipation allows it to anticipate upcoming moves.It's hard to hit something when they know what your going to use" smirked Near.

"Now, Croagunk, Attack!" yelled Near.

Croagunk hopped back just a bit, huffed and puffed his chest, and fired a strong blast of mud from it's mouth towards the opponent; Mud Slap! It hit Machop's chest
sending him off the edge of the cliff once more,this time he didn't hit the floor, however. A pokeball hit it's back and locked the Super Power pokemon in it's spherical prison.

"Gotcha'" joked Near walking to the ball and picking it up.

Chapter 4- A new...Hero!? Vs Koffing! Protect Jordan!

After Willer and Lukas's first battle, they decided to travel together for a short while because there were no pokemon center in Cascade Beach. They would watch each other's back. Lukas wanted to use those months of training with the Professor of Cascade to good use...However we still have no idea what Willer wants in Aruma. At the end of Route 1, the two boys took separate routes, Willer headed into the Swamp via Route 2, Lukas decided to go to Aqua Laguna through route 21.

-------------Route 2; The Swamp--------------------

Willer was almost halfway through Route 2. He had caught 2 pokemon in the swamp so far! A docile Grimer who tried to ambush him for some food and a timid Cacnea who he found and fought earlier in the route. He decided to train both of them.

Willer's Current Team-
Tailow (Jet) Male Sassy
Cacnea (Pike) male Timid
Grimer (Pink) Female Kind

Willer wasn't wearing his tinted goggles today. You could see his unusual black colored eyes, like two round blackberries. They went well with his tanned skin.
After a bit of walking Willer heard some rustling behind a bush. He turned around, mud squishing inbetween his toes and stared at the bushes for a while. Must have been his imagination. He continued to walk through the muddy swamps, wild life all around him. He held a fishing rod he had purchased from a walking salesman along with some extra pokeballs.

Rustle...rustle.

Willer spun around.

"Who's there!?" he demanded. For the first time it felt as if he was in true peril since he got into the island. A few moments went by as he couldn't hear anything else. He bent down as if trying to see through the bushes. He slowly tucked his fishing rod into a special slot of his bag.
Willer got up and walked away once more, hands in his pockets. And there was a rustling once more.

"Now!" He yelled. A flash appeared from behind the bushes and a Grimer popped out and glompedsomething.

Now if we rewinded the scene to when Willer was crouched down you would see he had rolled Grimer's pokeball into the bushes secretly, if he heard the rustling he would give the signal and Grimer would attack. It was a success.

"Help!" called a muffled voice from under Grimer. Sounds like a boy.

Willer ran over to the scene and saw Grimer oozing on top of a teen, around Willer's age (13-15), He had a slight build and was wearing a battered suit. A suit in the swamp? What the hell?

He had silverish hair ,not too long, and white skin with brown eyes.

"Get off me!" he demanded, a tear rolling down his eye. Willer tossed Grimers ball at the Sludge-like pokemon and it locked it inside and flew right back to Willer's hands.

"What are you doing following me?" asked Willer.

"I got lost in this huge Swamp! I'm no good as a trainer" complained the teen as he stood up. He was a bit shaky.

"I thought you could lead me to the next town... please help me! I won't be a bother" said the teen. He had a pretty rough voice for such a momma's boy.

"Well what's your name?" asked Willer as he turned around and marched on.

"Jordan Day" replied the teen as he followed.

They walked for a while, talking a bit, sharing little stories (Willer mainly bragged about his first battle, against Lukas)

"Willer,wait!" yelled Jordan . "Look!"

Willer looked to the right and saw two Koffing making their ways past some trees.

"Ko" gasped the larger one as he eyed at the two future victims.

The other Koffing grinned evilly. A lunch maybe? They could find some valuables off these kids too.
"Stay back, Jordan!" called out Willer as he pulled out a single pokeball. Through thetransparentt red you could see a small bird sitting there, just waiting to come out.

"Jet, Focus Energy then Peck!" commanded Willer.

Jet flew out of a Pokeball with a pre-charged Focus Energy. He focused on the foe and pecked thesmallerd Koffin right on the poison mark. Critical hit!
The otherKoffingn turned around and rammed into it sending Tailow towards the ground. Tailow spread his wings and glided above the mud to stop itself from slamming into the ground.Koffingin let out an array of poisonous gasses in all directions. The gasses inched their ways towards the two teens.

"Danggit...Jet use gust!" Tailow sped up and u-turned when it reached his master, he was going to dive straight into the poison cloud. It began spinning rapidly with it's wings spread apart making a small flying Cyclone. Tailow cut through the smoke , the gusts blowing the smoke towards other directions and hit Koffing with a drilling peck , piercing koffing slightly and leaving a bleeding wound. Koffing plummeted to the ground.

"And that's how it's done!" bragged Willer as he started to walk off.

Jordan stood there dumbfounded. When Willer turned around and began to walk away he smiled a dangerous smile.
Jordan pocketed the pokeball he would have used to attack Willer from behind and followed him deeper into the swamp.

Some comments would be nice... =D

It would help not to release so many chapters at once, because your fic is not well known yet. It's best if you give your readers a chance to stop and read one chapter, rather than say 4, 5 , or 6. Don't worry, I had the SAME problem when I started and that was not too long ago (September 2007).

I'll get to reviewing your fic and edit this post, 'kay?

Just read the first chapter.

Ehh...I can clearly see that this is your first fic. You made plently of grammatical and common sense errors.

He wore a navy blue short-sleeved shirt with a small eagle on the right sleeve.

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There are no eagles in the Pokemon world.

His elekid was next to him smiling to, a pretty low level one at that.

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Captilize Elekid. It's a proper noun.

He wore goggles over his eyes, large shorts and a T-Shirt with a bull insignia on the back.

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There are no bulls in the Pokemon world. Just Tauros (and Miltank I guess).

Overall, I'm not going to lie to you, the first chapter was pretty much dry and generic. Be more descriptive and add many more side stuff, y'know? Being your first chapter, you want it to be eye catching, breath taking, etc.

Instead of having these: "-------------Cascade Beach's Beach---------------", you could easily just say something about the setting changing.

A good thing I liked was the minor cliffhanger at the end about the other Saller.

Keep practicing. English class is your BEST FRIEND in fan fic writing, trust me!

"ATTACK!" he commanded. Stunky got up and turned around, his rear facing the opponents. Mr. Mime and the Beggar raised an eyebrow simultaneously.
Stunky released a highly poisonous gas from his...Rear end; a poison gas attack!

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From my fic...

The newly evolved Skuntank nodded her head before turning to face Diamond, her buttocks in the direction of Mark, Marcia, and their Pokemon.

Mismagius looked confused as it stared at Rose's butt, seemingly attracted to it, "Mage...magius?"

Marcia waved her arms and shook her head rapidly, trying to protect the Ghost Pokemon, "No! No! No get near! No! No get near!"

Diamond chuckled as Mismagius floated in his direction, nearing Rose's buttocks as it let off a rather soothing, and pleasant smell for once, indicating her happiness.

Finally, Diamond could not wait any further, "EXPLOSION!"

He returned Dex as he ran to take cover behind a large tombstone. He tightly closed his eyes and placed his right index finger in his right ear and left index finger in his left ear.

Rose closed her eyes tightly as well before squeezing an enormous load of flatulence out of her behind. The flatulence almost looked similar to a flaming, Hyper Beam attack, however, it came out of her buttocks, strangely enough.

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Coincedence, I dunno. But, you gotta admit, the farting skunk thing is pretty sweet. XD

Thanks, and yes the first chapter was too dry for my taste. The captilizing mistakes were because I didn't really pay attention. And yeah I never noticed the whole bull/eagle thing. I like your descriptions, I'll work on that. And yeah it's my first fan-fic. Problem is it takes a bit for the thick of the plot to come but it will come so hang in there.

And yes, a farting Skunk is amazing. You did Explosion just as I imagined.

ok I've just read the first chapter and i wasn't overley impressed, you have to sell me your story within the first chapter people won't usually read on if they don't see anything to read on for if it's needed write a Prologue to spice it up a bit. Another irritating fact is discription, i see hints of it but it seems to fade away, Lets take the beach for example.

It was a very cold, windy day in the beaches of Cascade Beach. It was wintertime so only trainers would be in the beach in this day. However a certain trainer was there for the feel of the beach, the sound of the ocean; Lukas York.

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Now spice it up a bit i mean it doesn't exactly start all exciting now does it 'It was a very cold, windy day in the beaches of Cascade Beach', could be changed too ' The icy wind cut through the air as the grains of sands danced through the bitter icy air of Cascade Beach.' Something like that brings more life to it and adds more feel and tesnion.

Second sentance isn't much better, I'm not sure 'this day' really fits are you trying to say in the day? Is there something special about the day? Expand if necessary.

Again with the third sentance we seem to get so little, 'for the feel of the beach' that's a nice point to be expanded on, add more depth, does he like the sand in between his toes? Or is it the footprints, or even perhaps the sunlight shimmering off of the sea or the wingull who steal his chips?

Another thing i don't understand is how you section the fan fiction off, it makes it look a lot less attractive, why not simply say 'Later than day at ...' or 'By now the moon had risen and Lukas had finally make it to Aruma port', just spice it up to bring the story to life.

Overall it's not bad, but it needs more depth more emotion, once you find a way to put peices of yourself into the writting to get people to feel what you feel and to see what you see then this will turn into an excelent fan fiction, best of luck.

Hmm maybe I should redo the first chapter eh? And 2 people is enough for me to realize that the seperating doesn't work.

Good news. Because Aruma Adventures has a wide cast of characters I made an Index with all chapters made, Released or not. It tells you the Chapter Name, Main Characters, If it's released or not. If you just want to follow your favorite character use the index! Wanna look forward to future chapters? Use the index! Just who fought in that one chapter...? Use the Index!

Hey! Saving this space for a review! I'll get on it tomorrow morning, too tired right now :).

Thanks in advance Turtleking!

Chapter 9- The Hyper Cutter. Vs. Poocheyena!

Lukas passed by a car parked by the Pokemon Center. It was the first heavily populated town he had visited so far; Sapphire Cove, the City in the Waters.
Lukas quickly rushed to the center after getting lost at least twice and almost getting run over by two cars. Of course it wasn't a huge city, pretty large but not like oh
lets say Aqua Laguna or Heaven's Peak and Skyscraper City. (So it's not like New York, a lot more peaceful)

It was a city with lush nature all around it and it was surrounded by the enormous lake, an island. It was a beauty, no doubt about it.
Lukas walked out of the Pokemon Center after taking a shower and healing his Pokemon. He was wearing blue jeans and a white shirt with a red and black jacket over it. The jacket had several pockets and was opened, despite the cold. Lukas stretched a bit and checked the map installed into his Pokedex. Aqua Laguna was right after the next route. Maybe he would become famous there. He laughed at the thought. And then laughed some more remembering his encounter with Willer.

"I'm only the best trainer in Cascade Beach!" said Lukas as a bluff. Oh what a lie. However he promised himself someday he'd be greater than anyone in not only Cascade Beach but the whole land of Aruma! Some day...

Suddenly something snatched the Pokedex right out of Lukas's hands. Lukas looked forwards to face the theif but he wasn't there. In a split second Lukas realized that maybe it wasn't a human so he quickly looked down and saw a small Poocheyena running off and taking a turn in an ally way.

"What the heck!?" yelled Lukas as he looked at the Poocheyena escape with his piercing eyes. He tried to follow but he tripped only to catch his balance again and begin the chase. 'Great. That was at least a second wasted' thought Lukas, furious with himself.
Lukas turned into the alley way between the center and some office building. Poocheyena was there glaring at Lukas. But it wasn't alone. It was with a whole pack of Poocheyena. Before Lukas could think they sprung forwards and all in unison went in fro the kill.

Lukas's eyes widened as he quickly spun around and began sprinting the other way, the Poocheyena close behind. He crossed the street seeing as no cars were coming and hopped a fence leading to a nice little park. He caught his breath and turned around only too see the Poocheyena TACKLE the 5 foot fence down with no trouble. Part of the fence ripped off and fell onto the ground. The Poocheyna snarled at the trainer.
Lukas's eyes popped out of their sockets at the sight.

"Shi-" Before he could finish he was swarmed by Poocheyna. Probably taking their anger out of noisy human on the poor kid. Lukas reached for his pockets as an instinct and pulled out a Pokeball.

"Thunder..." he called out as he leaned back and dodged a bite to the face by inches.


"SHOCK!"


Elekid popped out of his Pokeball and rotated his arms at amazing speeds. The Poocheyena looked back only to be shocked by a high voltage blast; luckily the Pokedex survived. There had to be at least 15 Poocheyena, most were knocked out by the lightning blast, most used their last breaths to take down Elekid. Only one was left, clearly higher leveled. The one with the Pokedex in it's mouth. It set it in the ground and glared at Elekid. It growled.

"Elekid, Quick Attack!" commanded Lukas. This shouldn't be too hard.
Elekid slowly nodded and sped towards Poocheyena to deliver a light blow. It was really weak. Poocheyna cackled at the weak attack and finished Elekid with a full body blow; A tackle atttack. It rolled over it's defeated opponent and grinned at Lukas. It had it's paw over Elekid's arms like a wrestler who completly oblitirated an opponent.


Lukas was amazed.

"H-how....!?" he asked. He soon realized. Intimidate, Poocheyena's ability makes it seem scarier to foes, lowering their confidence and power. Which was perfect.

"Tsk. Good blow," said Lukas as he held up a pokeball. It opened as Elekid was surrounded by light tendrils that sealed him in the ball. The ball closed tight.

"But I'd really like my Pokedex back, if you wouldn't mind" he finished as he pulled out a second ball.
Poocheyena smirked. It was a thief. It had thrills when it stole things from humans. It loved to see them frustraded, it was such a good laugh.
Lukas threw a Pokeball into the air as Corphish came out and landed on the ground, claws crossed. She glanced past the claws at the opponent.
Poocheyena isntantly began growling, his upper lip quivering with ferocity; Intimidate!
Corphish stood there looking at the foe without moving. It simply stared.

Poocheyena was slightly annoyed. It then began howling into the air.Howl, a special attack that will istantly raise a confident Pokemon's attack. And this Poocheyena was definatly confident. It went in for a tackle. There was a 12.3 meter distance which it covered at a very quick speed and it went in to attack to frightened Corphish. Or at least it thought it was frightened.

"Vice...GRIP!" yelled Lukas as he swung his arm. Corphish wasn't too used to Lukas but he definitely liked how he could make Corphish stronger, and a bond was already forming. By the time he finished the syllable in grip Corphish had already clutched Poocheyena with it's strong claws. Poocheyena winced at the pain as it yelled into the air.

Corphish simply stood there holding Poocheyena into the air, a strong hold on him. Poocheyena glared down...How? It shouldn't hurt this much...It should be intimidated!!!

" 'Hyper Cutter' " recited Lukas with a smirk. " 'A certain Pokemon ability that makes the pokemon immune to attack reduction'," finished Lukas, a line straight from the Pokedex.

"FINISH HIM" said Lukas in a mortal combat-like voice.
With it's free claw, the left one, Corphish fired a single large bubble and shielded it's eyes. The bubble popped in contact sending a pressurized water explosion at Poocheyna who lay there unconscious.
Lukas rolled the ball onto Poocheyena and it locked it in the ball. Poocheyena Caught.
Lukas pocketed Corphish and smirked. Willer would have nothing on him now.

Chapter 9- The Hyper Cutter. Vs. Poocheyena!

Lukas passed by a car parked by the Pokemon Center. It was the first heavily populated town he had visited so far; Sapphire Cove, the City in the Waters.

Lukas quickly rushed to the center after getting lost at least twice and almost getting run over by two cars. Of course it wasn't a huge city, pretty large but not like oh lets say Aqua Laguna or Heaven's Peak and Skyscraper City. (So it's not like New York, a lot more peaceful)

It was a city with lush nature all around it and it was surrounded by the enormous lake, an island. It was a beauty, no doubt about it.

Lukas walked out of the Pokemon Center after taking a shower and healing his Pokemon. He was wearing blue jeans and a white shirt with a red and black jacket over it. The jacket had several pockets and was opened, despite the cold. Lukas stretched a bit and checked the map installed into his Pokedex. Aqua Laguna was right after the next route. Maybe he would become famous there. He laughed at the thought. And then laughed some more remembering his encounter with Willer.

"I'm only the best trainer in Cascade Beach!" said Lukas as a bluff. Oh what a lie. However he promised himself someday he'd be greater than anyone in not only Cascade Beach but the whole land of Aruma! Some day...

Suddenly something snatched the Pokedex right out of Lukas's hands. Lukas looked forwards to face the theif but he wasn't there. In a split second Lukas realized that maybe it wasn't a human so he quickly looked down and saw a small Poocheyena running off and taking a turn in an ally way.

"What the heck!?" yelled Lukas as he looked at the Poocheyena escape with his piercing eyes. He tried to follow but he tripped only to catch his balance again and begin the chase. 'Great. That was at least a second wasted' thought Lukas, furious with himself.

Lukas turned into the alley way between the center and some office building. Poocheyena was there glaring at Lukas. But it wasn't alone. It was with a whole pack of Poocheyena. Before Lukas could think they sprung forwards and all in unison went in fro the kill.

Lukas's eyes widened as he quickly spun around and began sprinting the other way, the Poocheyena close behind. He crossed the street seeing as no cars were coming and hopped a fence leading to a nice little park. He caught his breath and turned around only too see the Poocheyena TACKLE the 5 foot fence down with no trouble. Part of the fence ripped off and fell onto the ground. The Poocheyna snarled at the trainer.

Lukas's eyes popped out of their sockets at the sight.

"Shi-" Before he could finish he was swarmed by Poocheyna. Probably taking their anger out of noisy human on the poor kid. Lukas reached for his pockets as an instinct and pulled out a Pokeball.

"Thunder..." he called out as he leaned back and dodged a bite to the face by inches.


"SHOCK!"


Elekid popped out of his Pokeball and rotated his arms at amazing speeds. The Poocheyena looked back only to be shocked by a high voltage blast; luckily the Pokedex survived. There had to be at least 15 Poocheyena, most were knocked out by the lightning blast, most used their last breaths to take down Elekid. Only one was left, clearly higher leveled. The one with the Pokedex in it's mouth. It set it in the ground and glared at Elekid. It growled.

"Elekid, Quick Attack!" commanded Lukas. This shouldn't be too hard.
Elekid slowly nodded and sped towards Poocheyena to deliver a light blow. It was really weak. Poocheyna cackled at the weak attack and finished Elekid with a full body blow; A tackle atttack. It rolled over it's defeated opponent and grinned at Lukas. It had it's paw over Elekid's arms like a wrestler who completly oblitirated an opponent.

Lukas was amazed.

"H-how....!?" he asked. He quickly realized. Intimidate, Poocheyena's ability makes it seem scarier to foes, lowering their confidence and power. Which was perfect.

"Tsk. Good blow," said Lukas as he held up a pokeball. It opened as Elekid was surrounded by light tendrils that sealed him in the ball. The ball closed tight.

"But I'd really like my Pokedex back, if you wouldn't mind" he finished as he pulled out a second ball.
Poocheyena smirked. It was a thief. It had thrills when it stole things from humans. It loved to see them frustraded, it was such a good laugh.

Lukas threw a Pokeball into the air as Corphish came out and landed on the ground, claws crossed. She glanced past the claws at the opponent.

Poocheyena isntantly began growling, his upper lip quivering with ferocity; Intimidate!
Corphish stood there looking at the foe without moving. It simply stared.

Poocheyena was slightly annoyed. It then began howling into the air.Howl, a special attack that will istantly raise a confident Pokemon's attack. And this Poocheyena was definatly confident. It went in for a tackle. There was a 12.3 meter distance which it covered at a very quick speed and it went in to attack the frightened Corphish. Or at least it thought it was frightened.

"Vice...GRIP!" yelled Lukas as he swung his arm. Corphish wasn't too used to Lukas but he definitely liked how he could make Corphish stronger, and a bond was already forming. By the time he finished the syllable in grip Corphish had already clutched Poocheyena with it's strong claws. Poocheyena winced at the pain as it yelled into the air.

Corphish simply stood there holding Poocheyena into the air, a strong hold on him. Poocheyena glared down...How? It shouldn't hurt this much...It should be intimidated!!!

" 'Hyper Cutter' " recited Lukas with a smirk. " 'A certain Pokemon ability that makes the pokemon immune to attack reduction'," finished Lukas, a line straight from the Pokedex.

"FINISH HIM" said Lukas in a mortal combat-like voice.

With it's free claw, the left one, Corphish fired a single large bubble and shielded it's eyes. The bubble popped in contact sending a pressurized water explosion at Poocheyna who lay there unconscious.
Lukas rolled the ball onto Poocheyena and it locked it in the ball. Poocheyena Caught.
Lukas pocketed Corphish and smirked. Willer would have nothing on him now.

I updated the Index. I would like to ask someone for help. I need someone to proofread my chapters before they are released and point out ways I can fix any grammar mistakes or rephrase a sentance.