[Release] Pokemon Chaos Mind

Should I use HGSS or FRLG Graphics?

  • HGSS

    Votes: 20 87.0%

  • FRLG

    Votes: 3 13.0%
  • Total voters
    23

Dradier234

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind


    Intro
    Pokémon Chaos Mind started 4 months ago. It has been developing more rapidly then usally these days. The plot of this game will be different and unique, just how I like it. This is using Essentials 10. The graphics will be FRLG because most graphics on Essentials are FRLG. I am very proud to present this to PC, as it is the first RMXP pokemon project that I successfully made without errors.

    Objective:
    Spoiler:



    Main Plot: Main Plot: You are 13 years old. As the son\daughter of the champion, you were really lucky. You embark on a quest to find out the mystery of team Chaos Mind, what they desire to do, and why.

    Team Chaos Mind is a evil organization with a unknown purpose. They lurk every where causing chaos, saying its for the good of our kind. They say to have only one weakness, the Chaos Necklace. They desire the necklaces because they are their life-force. They currently wield the Chaos Necklace, but they struggle to keep hold of it because of the life force of the Pokemon dragging it away.

    Your dad explains to you about the how the world started and how Pokémon saved all mankind from Team Chaos Mind long ago. Your dad tells you to find out more about team Chaos Mind, and he sends you to his PKMN Champion Study Lab to get a Pokémon, although your mother Minerva highly disagrees. She thinks its best that you stay home and learn life skills. You go anyway, determined to get your starter Pokémon and begin your journey.

    Along the journey, you discover many Gym Leaders and many many secrets. There are many challenges ahead of you, and many accomplishments to beat. You are a proud trainer, and seek good out of the evil. You see the Chaos Mind as a destructive obstacle to your destiny, and you do what you can to stop it from ruining your fate.TO be continued.


    Story of long ago:
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    Experience:
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    Gym Leaders
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    Team
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    Features
    All new region
    All new plot
    New organization\team
    new unexpected rival
    BW Load Screen
    Some events from amima


    Progress
    Spoiler:

    Media

    Final New Screens
    Spoiler:


    New Screens
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    Old Screens
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    Release
    Download Alpha 0.5: https://www.mediafire.com/?hamn1mo94s560ar

    Credits
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    Thank ya all
     
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    Congrats on starting another game dude! But there are a few things you could fix IF YOU WANT:
    -Add a better stroryline : The one you have currently is not really attractive(without any offence). Spice things up and add more plot to the storyline. Show that Team Chaos have a VERY evil plan and that the hero must jump in to stop it and not because his dad ordered him to.
    -On the last screenshots : I think you should use thinner ledges.
    -Upgrade your graphics : Just like Rayquaza once told me, people like more up-to-date graphics like HGSS-DPPt-BW-B2W2. (This is just an opinion, it looks good with FR/LG graphics too).
    After that the game looks good, if you ever need a storyliner i'm available to help you whenever you want!
     
    JNathan said:
    Congrats on starting another game dude! But there are a few things you could fix IF YOU WANT:
    -Add a better stroryline : The one you have currently is not really attractive(without any offence). Spice things up and add more plot to the storyline. Show that Team Chaos have a VERY evil plan and that the hero must jump in to stop it and not because his dad ordered him to.
    -On the last screenshots : I think you should use thinner ledges.
    -Upgrade your graphics : Just like Rayquaza once told me, people like more up-to-date graphics like HGSS-DPPt-BW-B2W2. (This is just an opinion, it looks good with FR/LG graphics too).
    After that the game looks good, if you ever need a storyliner i'm available to help you whenever you want!
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    Ill add storyline as I progress. Thanx! Ill also update the tiles by using crazy ninja guys HGSS ones. I might need a storyliner.

    Saving Raven said:
    Good luck on your game, it could really be something good if you work hard on it
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    Thanx!

    Update: I am looking mappers to update my maps into HGSS.
     
    Ęℓαчиıı said:
    You don't need mappers to update maps into HG/SS. You can do that yourself.
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    Yes, but I've mapped all the way up to Route 3 using FRLG, and I want a break. It also doesn't hurt to have a mapper.

    JNathan said:
    Then don't hesitate to ask my help! That's why we're a community, to help each other.
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    I'll surely ask for help when I need it! :D

    ProjectL said:
    i love the idea of having mom as your rival
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    That might change... Thanks though!

    Update: I now have HGSS chars/overworlds. Remapping is now started in HGSS style by Nintendork.
     
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    Dradier234 said:
    Yes, but I've mapped all the way up to Route 3 using FRLG, and I want a break. It also doesn't hurt to have a mapper.

    I'll surely ask for help when I need it! :D


    That might change... Thanks though!

    Update: I now have HGSS chars/overworlds. Remapping is now started in HGSS style by Nintendodork.
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    What did I say about the name? -w-

    Also, I'm mapping a few of your maps, I said, I am busy with my own game.
    Plus, seeing how they're done can give you idea on how to do it better.
     
    I have some new screenies. Theres a new revealed character, Gary Oak.. This game follows some anima events to make it familiar.. This is when the player finds gary oak trying to catch a Kanghastan.... Eoic failure for him... Gary playes a important role in the game, when you get stronger, he battles you a couple times, and helps you out sometimes..

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind

    Credits to CrazyNinjaGuy for the char of Kanghastan in his kit..
    Another funny screen
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind
     
    Looks fine to me, but try to stay clear of using internet lingo within the game. Things such as "omg", "lol", "idk", etc. should really not be used, unless you're going for some type of comedic approach or that's just generally how you prefer it.

    I just find that spelling it out fully looks more professional and polished.
     
    Urge, no ones posting...

    New story of long ago
    Spoiler:

    Heres a screen of HGSS styled deck city, forgive me for double posting.
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind
     
    Dradier234 said:
    I guess.. I'm now asking for
    Heres New Pyron City, please give me advice on what to fix.
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    it's really empty and too square. It looks boring, if I were to visit it it would seem kind of uninteresting.
    you need to make the borders less square like, and make it curve like, and flowing.

    Dradier234 said:
    Urge, no ones posting...
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    there is no symmetry. while a town is different from a route, where one would be in the outdoors and wild, this one would have been planned out and made by real people; it seems like it was made randomly. You need to make it symmetrical and less cluttered and more interesting.
     
    Saving Raven said:
    it's really empty and too square. It looks boring, if I were to visit it it would seem kind of uninteresting.
    you need to make the borders less square like, and make it curve like, and flowing.


    there is no symmetry. while a town is different from a route, where one would be in the outdoors and wild, this one would have been planned out and made by real people; it seems like it was made randomly. You need to make it symmetrical and less cluttered and more interesting.
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    Hmmm, bout this?
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind

    New banner by Pikakitten. Put this in your sigs please!
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind
     
    Dradier234 said:
    Hmmm, bout this?
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind

    New banner by Pikakitten. Put this in your sigs please!
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Chaos Mind
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    I like what you've done; I would move the blue/white building back a few spaces to keep it away from the trees, and connect the bottom concrete path with the rest of it with the path in the middle and it should be fine, good job! 8/10
     
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