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Shiny Man 64 DS (Mario Comic)

Ark Kuvis

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    • k, It's a spoof of Super Mario 64 DS. It stars Mario, Luigi, Wario, Yoshi, & Princess Peach just after the game. Though, Mario discovers a radioactive feather, and Mario's new adventure begins!

    Comics:
    Intro: Remakes Suck
    #1: Seems Luigi & Wario have a thing for the Princess, sure glad Mario isn't here.
    #2 Yoshi, the Mario hating prick.
    #3: When in doubt, Blame Mario.
    #4:If I tell you this title, I'm going to have to kill you.
    #5: OSHILOLN00B
    #6: Seems Toad has bad luck.....
    #7: Dr Willy and Zero are giants
    #8 Shiny Man's first battle
    #9: Seems Toad Jr got fused with that koopa.
    #10: Poor Toad Jr. He thinks he got it bad now.....
    #11: No good will come of this. Cept the new Wario Sprite.
    #12: W00, mai birfday.
    #13: If you think this is a serious comic, look at Wario's expression
    #14: The name's Shiny Man (Extra long issue)
    #15: The Shiny Wave (Extra long issue)
    #16: Happy Ending? I think not!
    #17: Super Freaky w00?
    #18: Graceful as a ninji, but annoying as Wario
    #19: THIS AIN'T NO GAME FOO'
    #20: You're the Yoshi now, Peach.
    #21: Tall Tails
    #22: Title
    #23: Back to Willy for a moment
    #24: The Omega Ultra Plan of d00m (Now with anime fangirls)
    #25: Shiny Man has fan guys too.
    #26: Author's Block
    #27: I would pick up that key. No joke.

    Filters:
    Greg, the n00b eating Yoshi (By me and Loony Lugia)
    The first Season Shiny Man quiz

    Christmas with the cast (don't wanna be around Wario after Nogfest)
    Why Wario hates winter


    Artpad Art
    Yoshi
    Mario
    Wario

    Fan Stuff:

    Controler of Flames:
    When Yoshi can't stand annoying Marios

    Credits:
    Koopaul for Castle
    TSR for Mario, Luigi, & Wario sprites
    Yoshi sprites found on Shy Guy Kingdom
    Peach & Waluigi made by Xander
    Dr Willy found on Shy Guy Kingdom
    NEW Wario made customly by Toni
    Toad Jr recolored by me and found on TSR
    Subconians found on TSGK
    Anything else found on TSR, TSGK, or Sprite Inc.
    Backrounds from BGHQ
     
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    Fox♠

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    • Seen May 16, 2011
    hmmmm, you're jugling 3 comics again?...don't get too busy k, anywyas pretty good start and all, not much to rate yet
     

    Jarman

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    Didn't the guy who makes M&L: Shadow Star Saga invent the nickname Weege?
     

    Fox♠

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    maybe, but didn't nintendo invent mario and luigi?...but hardly anyone credits them
     

    Ark Kuvis

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    • Weege is what Mario calls Luigi in the Comic book, "Super Mario Adventures". I didn't steal it.
    New Comic soon k?
     

    Ark Kuvis

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    • Shiny Man, Shiny Man, does what ever, Mario can! Shpins his cape, kills a guy.Luigi says, he can fly. Yoshi hates him, he is the Shiny Man!
    New comic.
     

    Ark Kuvis

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    • Plz post.
    New comic.
    While Luigi & Wario fight, Seems The Doc and his robot landed in the Mushroom kingdom....
     

    O

    Your Mom
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    • Not that good. The jokes aren't funny, the speech bubbles, some of the bubbles suck, Some don't. My advice, think of good jokes. Oh and, Allstories, nice drawing.
     

    Ark Kuvis

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    • meh, I thank you for atleast telling me.
    I'm not that good at jokes. What people here lol at, another forum says it's painfully funny. But I agree that Shiny Man has to be funnier. Though myself, find the newest comic pretty funny.
    Thanks for actually speaking your opinion. I'm not gonna go "lol you phail" on you cuz I rarely get critism on this board.
     

    Goatman56

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    • Seen Oct 21, 2019
    Alright Davis, i've never graded one of your comics before. Lets start off with something good. You got good backgrounds, and sprites are okay. Also things you might improve on. Sometimes the words in the bubbles are cramped (not good), the jokes are okay but not great (number 6 made me smile), some minor grammar mistakes.
    Also, the reason because no one posts is because its not about pokemon. I mean look at all the comics, pokemon, pokemon, and more pokemon. Anyways thats going off topic, your score is 7/10. Overall its a nice comic to read :D.
     

    Ark Kuvis

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    • Goatman56 said:
    Alright Davis, i've never graded one of your comics before. Lets start off with something good. You got good backgrounds, and sprites are okay. Also things you might improve on. Sometimes the words in the bubbles are cramped (not good), the jokes are okay but not great (number 6 made me smile), some minor grammar mistakes.
    Also, the reason because no one posts is because its not about pokemon. I mean look at all the comics, pokemon, pokemon, and more pokemon. Anyways thats going off topic, your score is 7/10. Overall its a nice comic to read :D.
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    it's about time XD
    I noticed. This comic got 17 posts. Most are by me.
    Teachy TV (Pokemon comic) got 11 posts and 3 of the posts are mine.
    Do the math.
    But a fair reveiw non the less. Thanks Goatman.
     
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