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Old August 8th, 2006 (08:26 PM). Edited August 9th, 2006 by Aura Warrior.
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I'm writing a new fanfiction called KoalBelles. It is based on the movie CowBelles on Disney Channel. The cows are gonna be replaced by Torkoals, and the characters will be changed.

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Katie and Kally Maelor are two spoilt sister trainers who got sent by their father to work at the family heat generator factory which is full of Torkoals. The sisters, along with their Pokemon, Espeon and Umbreon, uncovers a plot to take over the factory. They tries to save the factory, and succeeds, causing chaos and mischief along the way!

That's just about the story. Any comments and suggestions are welcome. I'll be back more more spoilers.

P.S. If anyone has a good comedy scene idea, PM me please.
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Old August 8th, 2006 (08:37 PM).
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Hmmm Sounds Good Even Though Fan-Fics Off Of Disney Channel Original Movies Really Appeal Too Me...But I Think You Could Make Something Good Of This...But Wouldnt It Make Sence To Use Milktanks Instead Of Torakals?? And Then When They Handle Other Animals Use Spoinks As The Pigs And Chickens As Torchics...
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Old August 9th, 2006 (05:50 PM).
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Read the story. Its a heat generator FACTORY, not a farm. The Torkoals are using Overheat and Flamethrower to generate electric. I will include some other Pokemon into the factory, for example, Miltanks will be preparing food for the staff and the Torkoals and Manectrics can take over theTorkoals in case they get too exhausted.
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