l~~Rate/Fix My Team~~l v2

[Lephisto]

Thank you for looking at my team and making it solid, I thank those very much. Now I am in need of some nicknames. So Yeah, and also dont forget to rate my team just post a number 1 to 10 to rate it. 1 being the worst and 10 the best. And please be honest,don't abuse it.

1. Vaporeon @ Leftovers (Opener/Leader)
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 252 HP / 216 Def / 40 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Haze
- Surf
- Ice Beam
Tank/Sweeper

2. Heracross @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Guts
EVs: 88 HP / 220 Atk / 200 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Megahorn
- Close Combat
- Pursuit
- Stone Edge
Choice Scarf Physical Sweeper

3. Dragonite @ Yache Berry
Adamant
EV: 120 HP / 184 Atk / 20 Def / 184 Spd
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Stone Edge / Thunderbolt / Thunder
-Earthquake
Physical Sweeper

4. Electivire @ Expert Belt
Mild / Rash
EV: 116 Atk, 216 SAtk, 176 Spd
-Hidden Power(ICE)
-Thunderbolt
-Fire Punch
-Cross Chop
Mixed Sweeper

5. Dusknoir @ Leftovers
Impish
EV: 252 Hp, 52 Def, 204 Sp Def
-Shadow Punch
-Fire Punch/Ice Punch
-Will O Wisp
-Plain Split
Speical/ Physical Wall

6. Snorlax @ Leftovers
EVs: 172 HP / 40 Atk / 120 Def / 176 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Crunch
- Body Slam / Return / Earthquake
- Rest
Special Tank

UPDATES
-Changed most EVs and movesets
-Removed Metagross
-Added in Heracross
-Added in Snorlax with ev spread plus moveset
-Added in Heracross Moveset and Spread
-Soon to be Updated- Nicknames
-Added in Sprites
-Chosen Opener
-Added in Held Items
-Might be swapping Snorlax for Bronzong

 

[Anti]

1. Vaporeon (new set needed if needs changing, please recommend)
Modest
EVS: 202 Sp A, 150 Def, 72 Spd, 82 Sp Def
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Haze
-Wish

You're gonna need lots more HP than that :/

2. Metagross
Adamant
EV: 150 Hp, 252Att, 106Sp
-Thunderpunch
-Meteor Mash
-Agility
-Earthquake

Agiligross FTW

3. Dragonite
Adamant
EV: 6Hp, 252Att, 252Sp
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw / Outrage
-Fire Punch
-Earthquake

Take this or metagross out...

4. Electivire
Adamant / Lonely
EV: 6Hp, 252 Atk, 252 Spd
-Ice Punch
-Thunderbolt / Thunderpunch
-EQ
-Cross Chop

Special Vire is lol

5. Dusknoir
Impish
EV: 252 Hp, 52 Def, 204 Sp Def
-Shadow Sneak
-Fire Punch/Ice Punch
-Will O Wisp
-Plain Split

Fine.

6. ????
Nature: ????
EV: ???? ???? ???? ???? ????
-????
-????
-????
-????

I'm also looking for a Pokemon that is good for this team or that will suit it, please post your move sets for it as well. For the question marks in the move sets please recommend some moves as well. I've tried really hard to cut down the weaknesses which comes down to a total of 9. For my sixth Pokemon i was thinking of a single type fighting Pokemon. Please recommend a sixth Pokemon as well that will make an addition to my team.

You're gonna need better walling, not to mention a spinner and a heal beller.

 

[Lephisto]

You're gonna need better walling, not to mention a spinner and a heal beller.

What about Miltank?, and the walling is fine in my opinion. My Vaporeon has 401 HP. I Will keep Dragonite and Metagross because they are my physical sweepers and wall. Electivire will be special Sweeper.

1. Vaporeon (new set needed if needs changing, please recommend) (Special Sweeper/Tank)
Modest
EVS: 202 Sp A, 150 Def, 72 Spd, 82 Sp Def
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Haze
-????

2. Metagross (Physical Wall/Sweeper) it has 360 Def and 340 Attack
Careful
EV: 6Hp, 154Att, 150Sp.Def, 200Sp
-Zen Headbutt
-Meteor Mash
-????
-Earthquake

3. Dragonite (Physical Sweeper)
Adamant
EV: 6Hp, 252Att, 52Def, 200Sp
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Thunder Punch
-Earthquake

4. Electivire (Special Sweeper)
Modest
EV: 6Hp, 252 Sp Att, 252 Spd
-Hidden Power(ICE)
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-????

5. Dusknoir (Special and Phyiscal Wall)
Impish
EV: 252 Hp, 52 Def, 204 Sp Def
-Shadow Punch
-Fire Punch/Ice Punch
-Will O Wisp
-Plain Split

6. ????
Nature: ????
EV: ???? ???? ???? ???? ????
-????
-????
-????
-????

I'm also looking for a Pokemon that is good for this team or that will suit it, please post your move sets for it as well. For the question marks in the move sets please recommend some moves as well. I've tried really hard to cut down the weaknesses which comes down to a total of 9. For my sixth Pokemon i was thinking of a single type fighting Pokemon. Please recommend a sixth Pokemon as well that will make an addition to my team.

 

[Anti]

why did you post the same thing twice? O_O

 

[Lephisto]

If you read my post carefully (no offense, please take no offense) you would see the purposes of the Pokemon being in my team. And to others: I'm looking for a sixth Pokemon, please recommend.

 

[ThePlaya]

do you really want a Sp.attacking elevtivier?

 

[Lephisto]

do you really want a Sp.attacking elevtivier?

yes, whats bad with that?

Sorry to double post, but please help.

 

[Iceman3k]

1. Vaporeon @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 252 HP / 216 Def / 40 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect / Roar
- Surf
- Ice Beam
Let's stick with this okay

2. Metagross @ Leftovers / Liechi Berry
Adamant
EV: 88 HP / 216 Atk / 136 Spd / 68 SDef
-Zen Headbutt
-Meteor Mash
-Agility
-Earthquake / Explosion
Explosion is also something to be considered.

3. Dragonite @ Yache Berry
Adamant / Lonely
EV: 120 HP / 184 Atk / 20 Def / 184 Spd
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Stone Edge / Thunderbolt / Thunder
-Earthquake
Run Lonely and Thunderbolt / Thunder to combat Skarmory, or use Stone Edge for anything else. Convert Def EVs into SAtk if running Lonely.

4. Electivire
Mild / Rash
EV: 116 Atk, 216 SAtk, 176 Spd
-Hidden Power(ICE)
-Thunderbolt
-Fire Punch
-Cross Chop
Since you're obviously trying to stand out, I'll leave this one alone. But trust me, there are a LOT better Sp. Sweepers out there. But at least be manly and run Cross Chop on it :x

5. Dusknoir
Impish
EV: 252 Hp, 96 Def / 160 SDef
-Shadow Sneak
-Fire Punch / Focus Punch
-Will O Wisp
-Plain Split
I didn't know Dusknoir could split PLAINS.

6. ????
Nature: ????
EV: ???? ???? ???? ???? ????
-????
-????
-????
-????

I'm also looking for a Pokemon that is good for this team or that will suit it, please post your move sets for it as well. For the question marks in the move sets please recommend some moves as well. I've tried really hard to cut down the weaknesses which comes down to a total of 9. For my sixth Pokemon i was thinking of a single type fighting Pokemon. Please recommend a sixth Pokemon as well that will make an addition to my team.

imo, add Snorlax. Remove Metagross, add a very powerful Choice Scarf attacker (Heracross or Medicham most specifically), and we'll go from there.

 

[Lephisto]

Ok, why take out metagross? is this good? Iceman3k please guide me to make this team better, i like your suggestions quite well.
If i follow your suggestions Iceman3k, what pokemon on my team are attackers? that arent walls? I'll remove metagross, and ill do what you said! because i think it is good

Ill be also updating my first post

 

[Lumine]

Heracross @ Choice Scarf / Choice Band
Adamant Nature
6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Ability: Guts
-Megahorn
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-Pursuit

CB'ed STAB'ed CC and Megahorn will do massive ownage.


Snorlax
As a tanker or sweeper?

 

[Lephisto]

snorlax is going to be a tanker. i'm going to have a poll to see what my team rates.

 

[Lumine]

Snorlax @ Leftovers
Careful Nature
EVs: 160 HP / 40 Atk / 56 Def / 252 SDef
Ability: Thick Fat
-Body Slam/Crunch
-Earthquake
-Rest
-Sleep Talk

 

[luke]

Just to let you know, Fire Punch or Thunderpunch are better on Dusknoir. Fire Punch is for Steel Types who wall Shadow Sneak and Thunderpunch is for Gyarados who will come in and lol at you with Taunt. Honestly, there are better Mixed Sweepers than Electivire. Infernape for example. Nice try being unique but I see a slim chance of it being successful.

 

[Spice Curry]

do you really want a Sp.attacking elevtivier?

yes, whats bad with that?

Special Attacking Electivires do exist and could function, but Vire's real asset is his awesome attack stat. Which is why most movesets try and utilize this:

[Electrivire] @ Life Orb
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Atk / 176 Spd / 80 SpAtk
Ability: Motor Drive
-Thunder Punch
-Cross Chop
-Ice Punch
-Earthquake

But Special Attacker could work I suppose. It certainly has the element of surprise going for it.

 

[Anti]

I'm also looking for a Pokemon that is good for this team or that will suit it, please post your move sets for it as well. For the question marks in the move sets please recommend some moves as well. I've tried really hard to cut down the weaknesses which comes down to a total of 9. For my sixth Pokemon i was thinking of a single type fighting Pokemon. Please recommend a sixth Pokemon as well that will make an addition to my team.
1. Vaporeon @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 252 HP / 216 Def / 40 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Haze
- Surf
- Ice Beam
Tank/Sweeper

Looking a lot better...

2. Heracross @ Choice Band
Trait: Guts
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Sleep Talk
- Megahorn
- Close Combat
- Stone Edge

CBcross FTW. You can scarf it if you'd rather run scarfxcross.

3. Dragonite @ Yache Berry
Jolly Nature
EV: 120 HP / 184 Atk / 20 Def / 184 Spd
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Stone Edge / Thunderbolt / Thunder / Fire Punch
-Earthquake
Physical Sweeper

I'd alter the EVs a tad...and run jolly, but okay.

4. Electivire
Mild / Rash
EV: 116 Atk, 216 SAtk, 176 Spd
-Hidden Power(ICE)
-Thunderbolt
-Fire Punch
-Cross Chop
Mixed Sweeper

PLEASE run the physical standard set...this isn't one of those pokemon to modify really...

5. Dusknoir
Impish
EV: 252 Hp, 52 Def, 204 Sp Def
-Shadow Punch
-Fire Punch/Ice Punch
-Will O Wisp
-Pain Split
Speical/ Physical Wall

Ice Punch is meh. Fire punch beats heracross switch-ins expecting WoW, while thunderpunch is for gyara. Pick one or the other.

6. Snorlax
EVs: 172 HP / 40 Atk / 120 Def / 176 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Crunch
- Body Slam / Return / Earthquake
- Rest
Special Tank

-Need moveset for heracross

UPDATES
-Changed most EVs and movesets
-Removed Metagross
-Added in Heracross
-Added in Snorlax with ev spread plus moveset

Edit in bold. Looking much better than before. Still needs spinner, cleric...but really, I'd get a heracross couhter, and a VERY good one, since it drives over your team in a bulldozer. Gliscor is the best IMO.

 

[Azonic]

Electivire@Life Orb / Expert Belt
Trait: Motor Drive
Nature: Naive
EVs: 252 Speed/ 228 Attack / 28 SAttack
- Thunderbolt
- Icepunch
- Earthquake
- Cross Chop

Dusknoir@Leftovers
Trait: Pressure
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP / 172 Defense / 80 Attack
- Pain Split
- Will-o-Wisp
- Shadow Sneak
- Thunderpunch

Heracross@Choice Scarf
Trait:Guts
Nature: Adamant / Jolly
EVs: 252 Attack / 252 Speed / 4 HP
- Close Combat
- Megahorn
- Earthquake
- Sleep Talk / Stone Edge

 

[Anti]

Electivire@Life Orb / Expert Belt
Trait: Motor Drive
Nature: Naive
EVs: 252 Speed/ 228 Attack / 28 SAttack
- Thunderbolt
- Icepunch
- Earthquake
- Cross Chop

Dusknoir@Leftovers
Trait: Pressure
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP / 172 Defense / 80 Attack
- Pain Split
- Will-o-Wisp
- Shadow Sneak
- Thunderpunch

Heracross@Choice Scarf
Trait:Guts
Nature: Adamant / Jolly
EVs: 252 Attack / 252 Speed / 4 HP
- Close Combat
- Megahorn
- Earthquake
- Sleep Talk / Stone Edge

Earthquake is a joke on heracross. I mean, what does it hit that close combat and the rest of its movepool doesn't hit? I think Icveman3k started a whole thread on that...

 

[Lephisto]

UPDATES:
-Added in Heracross Moveset and Spread
-Soon to be Updated- Nicknames

 

[KingofAnime]

I once fought a really mean Vaporeon with Acid Armor. This might help increase your walling powers.

With that said, toss out haze for it, since it kinda shoots you in the foot there...

 

[Iceman3k]

I guess we're ready for another evaluation, aren't we?

1. Vaporeon @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 252 HP / 216 Def / 40 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect / Roar
- Surf
- Ice Beam
Tank/Sweeper
I still think this wants Roar.

2. Heracross @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Guts
EVs: 88 HP / 220 Atk / 200 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Megahorn
- Close Combat
- Pursuit
- Stone Edge
Choice Scarf Physical Sweeper
Hey those look like the same EVs I used :o

3. Dragonite @ Yache Berry
Adamant
EV: 120 HP / 184 Atk / 20 Def / 184 Spd
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Stone Edge / Thunderbolt / Thunder
-Earthquake
Physical Sweeper
Dragonite.

4. Electivire
Mild / Rash
EV: 116 Atk, 216 SAtk, 176 Spd
-Hidden Power(ICE)
-Thunderbolt
-Fire Punch
-Cross Chop
Mixed Sweeper
That sexy beast of an Electivire that we both made

5. Dusknoir
Impish
EV: 252 Hp, 52 Def, 204 Sp Def
-Shadow Punch
-Fire Punch
-Will O Wisp
-Pain Split
Speical/ Physical Wall
Me thinks you should stay with Fire Punch. Enemy Heracross w/Pursuit is the potential threat.

6. Snorlax
EVs: 172 HP / 40 Atk / 120 Def / 176 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Crunch
- Body Slam / Return / Earthquake
- Rest
Special Tank
Snorlax.

-Need moveset for heracross

UPDATES
-Changed most EVs and movesets
-Removed Metagross
-Added in Heracross
-Added in Snorlax with ev spread plus moveset
-Added in Heracross Moveset and Spread
-Soon to be Updated- Nicknames
-Added in Sprites

Yeah, now I can't think of anything that can strike this team down.